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Imitation In Slow Motion
Contributed by
silverscent
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Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 10:33:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Honey-pot holes in a
sycamore tree and gum drops on
minted leaves, that worship the
graceful gold that smiles upon life.
Sugar coated
stretches of the
truth imagination.
Conventional structures
In rhythmic letters
Are implied as beautiful and
Significant, more so than
In short sighted vision.
Delighted sensations of
melt in the mouth creamy
textures, and the fragrance of
summer in a hand held bunch.
Those sensuous gifts are
offered in a sincere gesture
of affection although not as
aromatic nor extravagant as
depiction perceives it.
The connecting emotion may be
Equal or greater than the wordiness
Of penned thoughts, yet the reality
Is bland, clich, and overlooked.
Portrayal of what the poetic
Mind, and eyes feel, is something
that can only be revealed as
an imitation in slow motion.
Copyright ©
silverscent
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2006-06-12 10:33:42]
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Re: Imitation In Slow Motion
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by irodethetrain2u on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 02:04:26 PM AEST
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| Very creative. Loved the movement. |
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Re: Imitation In Slow Motion
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 04:52:44 PM AEST
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Glad I couldn't find posts of my regular buddies and got captured by your title and nickname. This is what I consider top of the line writin'! Powerful flow and vivid in its depiction of romance. Fine "imitation in slow motion." My compliments
wabl
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Re: Imitation In Slow Motion
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 01:45:11 PM AEST
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Very original and creative.
Well done my new poetry friend.
Jeff |
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