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[aid] => mick
[title] => Women ..
[time] => 2006-06-10 01:35:51
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[bodytext] => They troop around in twos and threes
with pretty heads and uncovered knees-
scented bright and queenly exteriors,
matted eyelashes and sleek poeteriors..
their possessive boots and flaring dresses,
perfect flowing lacquered tresses;
each day they make their wriggling way
to preen and gossip..
perhaps to pray~
In merry groups or private pairs,
they blithely bask in all my stares
which lead into my mute frustration
and thoughts of lovely copulation!
No other holy or philisophic themes
can disturb my sinfully tainted dreams;
for what can eternity, offer me better:
..than a 'girl'd tight skirt' ..and tighter sweater-
lol...
Billy 2006
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Women ..
Contributed by
Man_On_High
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Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 01:35:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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They troop around in twos and threes
with pretty heads and uncovered knees-
scented bright and queenly exteriors,
matted eyelashes and sleek poeteriors..
their possessive boots and flaring dresses,
perfect flowing lacquered tresses;
each day they make their wriggling way
to preen and gossip..
perhaps to pray~
In merry groups or private pairs,
they blithely bask in all my stares
which lead into my mute frustration
and thoughts of lovely copulation!
No other holy or philisophic themes
can disturb my sinfully tainted dreams;
for what can eternity, offer me better:
..than a 'girl'd tight skirt' ..and tighter sweater-
lol...
Billy 2006
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Re: Women ..
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by bronzen on
Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 01:47:14 AM AEST
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| said like a real man nicely done |
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Re: Women ..
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by emystar on
Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 02:01:48 AM AEST
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Mercy now, I'm tottally speachless.
You remind of someone I once knew named coach.
Very good write and u got a laff from me.
My ole friend was long ago 10 or 12 years.
He came to see me.
Very good write friend.
Jus wonderin what your pen name means?
Ya never know till ya asks so please p.m. please?
big smiles,
emy |
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Re: Women ..
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 09:22:43 AM AEST
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| Smiles... |
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Re: Women ..
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 10:00:04 AM AEST
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Good grief!!! You ARE all man!!
lol
...interesting piece, this. Men are such visual creatures.
Ruled by a sightly feature or wandering thought . . .
Very creative, you naughty boy! lol
~Breezy |
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Re: Women ..
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by shelby on
Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 11:34:33 AM AEST
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what a man what a man! LOL I enjoyed this one.
Michelle |
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Re: Women ..
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 11th June 2006 @ 11:44:01 AM AEST
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LOL!
This gave me a much needed laugh; partly because what you said is (for the most part) true, and partly because it had me rolling my eyes and saying; "He's such a man!"
Scorp. |
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Re: Women ..
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by wizard on
Sunday, 11th June 2006 @ 08:11:23 PM AEST
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hey bro, i know i read this a while back, in an email, probably..still think its a great write! it certainly evokes a smile!!!
yeah,
wiz |
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Re: Women ..
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 01:04:50 AM AEST
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Omg lol you are a man.hehehe
Really Billy that was quite funny.
I needed that laugh.great write
hugs |
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Re: Women ..
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by jyssvw22 on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 02:38:59 PM AEST
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I think you speak for all straight men… whether they admit it or not…..damn women!....but you gotta love em…lol
Nice as always
Your fan-
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Re: Women ..
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 07:42:13 PM AEST
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Ahem, lol. Billy~um, what would you have me say, Typical male. You know what they say about women, "you can't live with 'em and ya can't live without them either, lol"
Becareful the horns are showing behind the halo *wink*. A most enjoyable piece of writing Billy~
love always,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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Re: Women ..
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by brew on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 08:01:42 PM AEST
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Yup YOU pass the straight test.......200% all the way.Never had my doubts, yet, now....its confirmed...! Yes, and hilarious.....I laughed and laughed.! Thank you for everything........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hugs
Brew~ |
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Re: Women ..
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by Whisper on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 03:59:04 PM AEST
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LOL I truly enjoyed that. Being a old Dinosaur i can say I laughed along with the male ,as you see it ,and I agree ,It must appear like that to you.
Good funny but truthful write. I enjoyed that.
Thank you for the smile Thank you for sharing
Whisper |
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Re: Women ..
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by Seans_Girl on
Thursday, 15th June 2006 @ 12:26:41 PM AEST
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| haha you and all men whom are straight. |
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