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Array ( [sid] => 121547 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Life [time] => 2006-06-09 18:53:15 [hometext] => Oftentimes its easier to fake a smile than it is to accept that, maybe your life just isnt how you thought it would be.. [bodytext] => I go through life pretending its great..
leading you to believe it’s this perfect fate
But if you look closely … past those lies
you’ll see the truth within my eyes.
I don’t know that you’ve ever realized
but behind this smile, I long to cry..
And deep within this lonely soul
lies more hurt and pain than you’ll ever know..
What my heart feels, I cannot show..
and where I’ve been, no one can go..
I’ve made no difference in this world, you see..
for I have wasted the life God has given me.
What I am will never reach what I wish to be
but I continue to live pretending it’s easy
Though deep inside, I pray for it to end..
I don’t want to live a life no one can understand…
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 21 [informant] => kellog [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Life

Contributed by kellog on Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 06:53:15 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

I go through life pretending its great..
leading you to believe it’s this perfect fate
But if you look closely … past those lies
you’ll see the truth within my eyes.
I don’t know that you’ve ever realized
but behind this smile, I long to cry..
And deep within this lonely soul
lies more hurt and pain than you’ll ever know..
What my heart feels, I cannot show..
and where I’ve been, no one can go..
I’ve made no difference in this world, you see..
for I have wasted the life God has given me.
What I am will never reach what I wish to be
but I continue to live pretending it’s easy
Though deep inside, I pray for it to end..
I don’t want to live a life no one can understand…

Copyright Â© kellog ... [ 2006-06-09 18:53:15]
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Re: Life (User Rating: 1 )
by bronzen on Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 07:08:39 PM AEST
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i hope this not about you because you cannnot say you can reach what you wish to be God has a purpose for all of us you may have many talents start broaden them

Re: Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Adelle on Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 02:23:26 AM AEST
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so so so sad!!! i wish i could give you reasons to want to live... but dear friend, God be with you... good write-
shanna

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