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Array ( [sid] => 121541 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Standing on Ice [time] => 2006-06-09 17:15:09 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Staring , Eyes never blinking
becoming disconnected to this
plateau
Hearing only the sounds of drums beating
easing the weary soul
Like a heart beat ever druming
plumping ever
slower as along we go
Taking deep slow breaths
Taking fresh air in .

A distant flute is playing and is carry my senses away

A silence carrying me away to warmer lands,
far away
Let your imigination go
Come fly with me to
Crystal , salty blue , warm, soothing waters below
A white sparkling sandy beach stretching out
before us

Feel the air fill your lungs
as you fly
feel yourself gliding there
Your eyes are keen to see the fishes
in the sea
Like the Dophins you suddenly leap free.
Diving , Deep ,and even deeper
Down under the sea
and
when all time has been had
You emerge again
with memeries of wonder.

Then suddenly thunder

Sunshine has gone away and such
sorrow fills me now
The Ocean's glisen ,is quite dull now

The mountains bare of their
ever green trees
The animals echo and cries
I hear crying in my ears
"Why, Why can't we have a say"
Its a sad sad day
That we all will have too pay

Sunshine we take for granted
Winds we believe are wild now
Earth and its soil is meant for so
much more bigger things


Sunshine and the Air

are leaving us behind


Whisper


People are dieing ,with out good reason Don't just count the loses
and Move on , only to make the same mistakes again.




[comments] => 2 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 16 [informant] => Whisper [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )
Standing on Ice

Contributed by Whisper on Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 05:15:09 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry



Staring , Eyes never blinking
becoming disconnected to this
plateau
Hearing only the sounds of drums beating
easing the weary soul
Like a heart beat ever druming
plumping ever
slower as along we go
Taking deep slow breaths
Taking fresh air in .

A distant flute is playing and is carry my senses away

A silence carrying me away to warmer lands,
far away
Let your imigination go
Come fly with me to
Crystal , salty blue , warm, soothing waters below
A white sparkling sandy beach stretching out
before us

Feel the air fill your lungs
as you fly
feel yourself gliding there
Your eyes are keen to see the fishes
in the sea
Like the Dophins you suddenly leap free.
Diving , Deep ,and even deeper
Down under the sea
and
when all time has been had
You emerge again
with memeries of wonder.

Then suddenly thunder

Sunshine has gone away and such
sorrow fills me now
The Ocean's glisen ,is quite dull now

The mountains bare of their
ever green trees
The animals echo and cries
I hear crying in my ears
"Why, Why can't we have a say"
Its a sad sad day
That we all will have too pay

Sunshine we take for granted
Winds we believe are wild now
Earth and its soil is meant for so
much more bigger things


Sunshine and the Air

are leaving us behind


Whisper


People are dieing ,with out good reason Don't just count the loses
and Move on , only to make the same mistakes again.








Copyright © Whisper ... [ 2006-06-09 17:15:09]
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Re: Standing on Ice (User Rating: 1 )
by Ruby2sdy on Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 05:34:28 PM AEST
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very good, some awesome imagery, wicked!

2sdyx


Re: Standing on Ice (User Rating: 1 )
by bronzen on Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 07:16:37 PM AEST
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i like this piece good work




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