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Array ( [sid] => 121497 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => They don't know [time] => 2006-06-08 15:54:04 [hometext] => Got the idea for the name and style from another persons poem called Just like you.About what people might think and what they don't know.1 of my longer and none rhyming ones. [bodytext] => They look at me, they think I have everythink 2 live for.
They look at me, they think I look happy.
They don't know,I hate myself and my life.
They don't know,I got hurt by my real parents when I was a kid.
They look at me, they think I'm pretty.
They look at me, they think I'm fine.
They don't know,my wrists and arms are covered in cuts and scars.
They don't know, I have 2 mental illnesses.
They look at me,they think I'm posh.
They look at me,they think I'm rich.
They don't know,I cry myself 2 sleep.
They don't know,that I want my daughter back more than I want money.
They look at me,they think I have loads of mates.
They look at me,they think I wanna be her.
They don't know,I couldn't feel more alone.
They don't know,I don't wanna be myself.
They don't know! [comments] => 1 [counter] => 199 [topic] => 61 [informant] => Kazzy1231 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

They don't know

Contributed by Kazzy1231 on Thursday, 8th June 2006 @ 03:54:04 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

They look at me, they think I have everythink 2 live for.
They look at me, they think I look happy.
They don't know,I hate myself and my life.
They don't know,I got hurt by my real parents when I was a kid.
They look at me, they think I'm pretty.
They look at me, they think I'm fine.
They don't know,my wrists and arms are covered in cuts and scars.
They don't know, I have 2 mental illnesses.
They look at me,they think I'm posh.
They look at me,they think I'm rich.
They don't know,I cry myself 2 sleep.
They don't know,that I want my daughter back more than I want money.
They look at me,they think I have loads of mates.
They look at me,they think I wanna be her.
They don't know,I couldn't feel more alone.
They don't know,I don't wanna be myself.
They don't know!

Copyright © Kazzy1231 ... [ 2006-06-08 15:54:04]
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Re: They don't know (User Rating: 1 )
by moses on Thursday, 8th June 2006 @ 04:25:37 PM AEST
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I may not know, but I care. I'm sorry to hear this, I too have been close to where you are in a mental state. All that I can say is try to keep your head up and just try to push through each moment not a whole day in one. Take it one step at a time and try to find something you enjoy among those steps.

Great Poem, and Keep Your Head Up,
-moses

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