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Array ( [sid] => 120824 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Broken [time] => 2006-05-26 23:18:22 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Memories are all that left
for this became to
big of a mess

dreams frozen in time
from all your
********* lines

hope scatter in the wind
for this love within
holding back these tears
made for you for you
became untrue

can’t stop thinking of you
for I’m still in love with
You
and this is true

why you have to put us in
this mess for it has put
my heart in distress
for I became weak for you
never though this would
come unglue

so please don’t push me
away for I love you
and need you
but we part anyway [comments] => 1 [counter] => 275 [topic] => 22 [informant] => chaos78 [notes] => |||Edited for profanity. - Moderator_14||| [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Broken

Contributed by chaos78 on Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 11:18:22 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Memories are all that left
for this became to
big of a mess

dreams frozen in time
from all your
********* lines

hope scatter in the wind
for this love within
holding back these tears
made for you for you
became untrue

can’t stop thinking of you
for I’m still in love with
You
and this is true

why you have to put us in
this mess for it has put
my heart in distress
for I became weak for you
never though this would
come unglue

so please don’t push me
away for I love you
and need you
but we part anyway




Copyright © chaos78 ... [ 2006-05-26 23:18:22]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by Kevin on Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 12:29:31 AM AEST
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Great write. I feel your pain...love can hurt can't it? I think most can agree that you suffer several heartbreaks before you find the right person. Anyway, enough of the sappy comment, very great write tho, i liked it a lot.

-Kevin




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