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Array ( [sid] => 120775 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => CRYING [time] => 2006-05-25 23:32:31 [hometext] => i wrote this poem very soon after i found out my ex cheated on me and when we split up [bodytext] => all balled up inside
im begining to feel anger and pride
instead of crying
i feel like im dying
i am begining to feel numb
my body is shuting down
no more can i cry
no more can i survive
my soul has been destroyed
i have been decieved
the hurt and pain
has been even destroying
to my faith and dignity
im trying to be strong
trying to go on
by sucking up my tears to dry
but they're begining to swell up inside
not knowing they are still flowing
trying to keep going...
but i am becoming ILL
and im begining to feel
the same kind of pains
that accompanied me when crying
for within my stumach i think i am dying
the pains are too intense
i feel my stumach is going to burst
with the painful pressure i now know is tears
how could anyone hurt this way?
how could a soul be in so much pain?
how is it possible to be so betrayed
how is it possible to be so raved?
raved and then left hurt and bleeding
i cant even forgive me
for putting my trust in man
i was abused and violated
how can i ever be saved?
i want to cry
but when will the tears subside?
when will this pain with in me die?
sick i am
from holding the tears with in
i feel my body is bursting
with tears that have been falling
deep on the inside
instead of the outside
oh God heal my pains
allow the spirit me, to substain
let down the rain
that it might wash away my pain
cleanse me from my hurt
and put back together my heart
only my God knows whats happened to me
only God knows how to heal me
trying to release my tears
hopeing to find a peace sincere
that i might believe in God
the way i have been taught
someday i will understand this all
someday i will understand why christ had to fall
he is my savior
my brother
and i pray
that the tears he shed that day,
that day he was
put upon the cross
will fall upon me today
and wash my pains away
oh God, please come with me to stay?

may 2005
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 75 [informant] => Adelle [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )
CRYING

Contributed by Adelle on Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 11:32:31 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished



all balled up inside
im begining to feel anger and pride
instead of crying
i feel like im dying
i am begining to feel numb
my body is shuting down
no more can i cry
no more can i survive
my soul has been destroyed
i have been decieved
the hurt and pain
has been even destroying
to my faith and dignity
im trying to be strong
trying to go on
by sucking up my tears to dry
but they're begining to swell up inside
not knowing they are still flowing
trying to keep going...
but i am becoming ILL
and im begining to feel
the same kind of pains
that accompanied me when crying
for within my stumach i think i am dying
the pains are too intense
i feel my stumach is going to burst
with the painful pressure i now know is tears
how could anyone hurt this way?
how could a soul be in so much pain?
how is it possible to be so betrayed
how is it possible to be so raved?
raved and then left hurt and bleeding
i cant even forgive me
for putting my trust in man
i was abused and violated
how can i ever be saved?
i want to cry
but when will the tears subside?
when will this pain with in me die?
sick i am
from holding the tears with in
i feel my body is bursting
with tears that have been falling
deep on the inside
instead of the outside
oh God heal my pains
allow the spirit me, to substain
let down the rain
that it might wash away my pain
cleanse me from my hurt
and put back together my heart
only my God knows whats happened to me
only God knows how to heal me
trying to release my tears
hopeing to find a peace sincere
that i might believe in God
the way i have been taught
someday i will understand this all
someday i will understand why christ had to fall
he is my savior
my brother
and i pray
that the tears he shed that day,
that day he was
put upon the cross
will fall upon me today
and wash my pains away
oh God, please come with me to stay?

may 2005




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Re: CRYING (User Rating: 1 )
by picturegramic on Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 11:40:40 PM AEST
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powerful write, I felt your pain, yet I feel the ending is full of hope! Thanks for sharing.


Re: CRYING (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 05:54:13 AM AEST
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fANTASTIC WRITE.
Awesome job.
huggs, blessings,
emy




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