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And glooms of the night
These shadows that pass
Through the times of our life

Glitters of sunshine
With thoughts from the past
Friends that I’ve had
And friends that have passed

Like the ocean at war my mind starts rage
Emotions and thoughts
As my memories change

Bad becomes good
Like the seasons bring change
Away with the old
So my heart can remain

Waters of rain
That replenishes my soul
Flow from my eyes
And cleanse out my soul

Look unto heaven
With tears in my eyes
They flow from my heart
To renew my mind

I see struggles in future
But some struggles passed
For I’ve found my true love
That will take my life past

Like the gate keeper of time
She holds all these rhymes
So my words will be true
As they pass from me unto you

I open my mouth but I shall not speak
I pickup my pin were I find my release
As my words start to flow my pain starts to go
But till were together at last my pain shell not pass

So flow from my heart and flow from my soul
This river of love that makes my life hole

~Steve~
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silence

Contributed by sride686 on Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 03:53:07 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Whispers in silence
And glooms of the night
These shadows that pass
Through the times of our life

Glitters of sunshine
With thoughts from the past
Friends that I’ve had
And friends that have passed

Like the ocean at war my mind starts rage
Emotions and thoughts
As my memories change

Bad becomes good
Like the seasons bring change
Away with the old
So my heart can remain

Waters of rain
That replenishes my soul
Flow from my eyes
And cleanse out my soul

Look unto heaven
With tears in my eyes
They flow from my heart
To renew my mind

I see struggles in future
But some struggles passed
For I’ve found my true love
That will take my life past

Like the gate keeper of time
She holds all these rhymes
So my words will be true
As they pass from me unto you

I open my mouth but I shall not speak
I pickup my pin were I find my release
As my words start to flow my pain starts to go
But till were together at last my pain shell not pass

So flow from my heart and flow from my soul
This river of love that makes my life hole

~Steve~




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Re: silence (User Rating: 1 )
by djdarkrose04 on Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 09:02:58 PM AEST
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I love the imagery that you portray in this poem. I was captured by this phrase...

"Like the gate keeper of time
She holds all these rhymes
So my words will be true
As they pass from me unto you"

I look forward to seeing more of your poems on here. Keep up the great work!


Re: silence (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 09:40:11 PM AEST
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well long time no see steve.
Like any other writes this one is excellent.
great job.

hugs


Re: silence (User Rating: 1 )
by SilverRain on Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 07:03:36 PM AEST
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This is really a touching piece...loved it.


Re: silence (User Rating: 1 )
by sidneyconrad23 on Wednesday, 10th November 2010 @ 05:13:57 AM AEST
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Really really nice God has given you a gift always use that keep writting.




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