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Pleading Love
Contributed by
keilantra
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Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 05:22:47 PM in AEST
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I used to look at you each day
See the way you sparkled with kindness and
There was so much warmth in your eyes
I used to look at you with love.
But now the pain wont go away
And every time your eyes catch mine
The look is more like a pleading
And I dont know if I can stay.
I used to smile at you each day
Your face was alive with laughter
Every time we were together
I used to smile at you with love.
But now days arent the way the were before
Something is completely different
When you smile your almost a million miles away
Your laughter is almost incoherent.
There used to be times when I wanted to be near you
But you were too far out of my reach
But now that youre standing right next to me
Im starting to wish that I could leave.
Being like this has built up too much tension
Im knotted up and dont understand
Why you can barely talk to me anymore
Let alone even hold my hand.
There used to be something between us
But I feel like its trickling away
When you smile at me its like a plead
And I dont know what to say.
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Re: Pleading Love
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by ThePhoenix on
Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 05:35:23 PM AEST
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| I think we can all relate to this one.Well done! |
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Re: Pleading Love
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 06:54:57 PM AEST
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it seems love is always quick to fade...well done.
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Re: Pleading Love
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 07:26:28 PM AEST
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"Used to be" usually does more'n trickle away,
It pleads 'n' pleads seemingly sincere 'till ya say goodbye, then it calls ya names! Been my experience anyway. Really enjoyed this "dear john 'r jane" like piece, kei.
wabl
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Re: Pleading Love
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by jujubee21 on
Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 08:51:59 AM AEST
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its like you took the thoughts right out of my head for what i'm going through.
good writing too |
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Re: Pleading Love
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by spencer on
Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 10:16:25 AM AEST
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| I've been there too bro and it's one of the last things i ever want to experience again. excellent poem |
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Re: Pleading Love
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by Spike on
Wednesday, 7th June 2006 @ 07:49:00 AM AEST
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The dissolution of something once great and beautiful is always desparing and, in the end, incomprehensible. How do we make love stay? How can we not stand to be with someone we once merged with on a spiritual level ? where has our special language gone? Easy to see the faults, too hard to explain them. You summed up all this and more in a terrific post.
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