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With a strange smile on her white face
She begged for help
As the time was not on her side

She carried a small dagger
Beneath her clothes
A small dagger covered in blood
The blood of the one her lips once kissed

The one she once held dear
The other part of her soul
Her other half

He showed up years after
With the wounds still fresh
He cried for hope
As it was passing him by

He carried one photo
One photo of the past
To remind him of the misfortune
And the goal to achieve

She was the one to hurt him
The one he adored
The missing part of his soul

Time did its thing
And led them to the bottom of despair
The wounds were aching
No pill could change

Mistakes were stopped in time
The dagger shined in the night
The wounds in his flesh were fatal
And she reached the bottom of the cliff

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Two parts of a whole

Contributed by Alma on Saturday, 20th May 2006 @ 01:02:06 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

She came to me in the middle of the night
With a strange smile on her white face
She begged for help
As the time was not on her side

She carried a small dagger
Beneath her clothes
A small dagger covered in blood
The blood of the one her lips once kissed

The one she once held dear
The other part of her soul
Her other half

He showed up years after
With the wounds still fresh
He cried for hope
As it was passing him by

He carried one photo
One photo of the past
To remind him of the misfortune
And the goal to achieve

She was the one to hurt him
The one he adored
The missing part of his soul

Time did its thing
And led them to the bottom of despair
The wounds were aching
No pill could change

Mistakes were stopped in time
The dagger shined in the night
The wounds in his flesh were fatal
And she reached the bottom of the cliff

Copyright © Alma ... [ 2006-05-20 13:02:06]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Two parts of a whole (User Rating: 1 )
by Kevin on Saturday, 20th May 2006 @ 02:13:41 PM AEST
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Wow, totally not what i was expecting. The title is very devious to the content of the poem, but i still liked this one a lot. Awesome write. very creepy too.

-Kevin

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