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[sid] => 120308
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => JESSIE'S THIRTEENTH
[time] => 2006-05-18 02:01:41
[hometext] => Written 10/28/05 last years b day
[bodytext] =>
SultryRose's Signatures
Such a beautifull, Tom boy
You've always been.
for you to be thirteen it's
so hard to comprehend.
Oh Jessie's thirteen, what
a luvly lady you've become.
She's tough, she's cool, she's smart.
Best of all she's precious in heart.
Jessie's thirteen, she's very smart.
In her heart she deeply
knows much 'bout luv.
She can sing beautyfully
Just like angels above.
Her heart's bigger than Texas
As compassion her rule.
Smart as a whip, my girl
She didn't learn everything
in school.
Mamaw's so proud to
be in your Earthly world.
Here she comes a beauty
she's an all American girl.
Happy, happy, 13
4-eva luv,
yomamaw
[comments] => 18
[counter] => 285
[topic] => 55
[informant] => emystar
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 32
[ratings] => 7
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => dedicatedpoems
)
JESSIE'S THIRTEENTH
Contributed by
emystar
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Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 02:01:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
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SultryRose's Signatures
Such a beautifull, Tom boy
You've always been.
for you to be thirteen it's
so hard to comprehend.
Oh Jessie's thirteen, what
a luvly lady you've become.
She's tough, she's cool, she's smart.
Best of all she's precious in heart.
Jessie's thirteen, she's very smart.
In her heart she deeply
knows much 'bout luv.
She can sing beautyfully
Just like angels above.
Her heart's bigger than Texas
As compassion her rule.
Smart as a whip, my girl
She didn't learn everything
in school.
Mamaw's so proud to
be in your Earthly world.
Here she comes a beauty
she's an all American girl.
Happy, happy, 13
4-eva luv,
yomamaw
Copyright ©
emystar
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Re: JESSIE'S THIRTEENTH
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by Lo2681 on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 02:40:44 AM AEST
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Very cute dedication. Yes time goes so quickly:)
~LO |
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Re: JESSIE'S THIRTEENTH
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by Lilly-Quill on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 05:01:21 AM AEST
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Nothing is so preciously valuable as our kids; and this is a multi-faceted gem, in it's self.
You are especially blessed~!
Lilly-Quill |
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Re: JESSIE'S THIRTEENTH
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by Jackee_line on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 05:14:50 AM AEST
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| well done a nice dedication |
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Re: JESSIE'S THIRTEENTH
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 06:12:26 AM AEST
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A very beautiful dedication to a very beautiful teenager... Well done.....
I am sure she's proud of you too..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: JESSIE'S THIRTEENTH
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by wizard on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 06:23:11 AM AEST
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a very nice birthday dedication.
wiz |
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Re: JESSIE'S THIRTEENTH
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 07:38:12 AM AEST
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Oh that young lady is blessed.
The beams of Emystar shine in all of their fullness upon her. How can she not but be the reflection of that fullness? :-
The epitome of fullness.
Kudos to a great dedication
Elizabeth
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Re: JESSIE'S THIRTEENTH
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by ButchHoward on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 08:48:31 AM AEST
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This is so precious Emy. Being the father of a 10 year old daughter, this reminds me how special all little girls are. She is blessed indeed to have someone who loves and admires her so deeply! Great write!
Butch |
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Re: JESSIE'S THIRTEENTH
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 09:35:12 AM AEST
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Your poetry is a touch of velvet 2 my heart.
words of love in a poem that is not a love poem and yet speaks of love. true divinity you
posess emy.
((((emystar))))
Ben |
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Re: JESSIE'S THIRTEENTH
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 04:07:18 PM AEST
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Mamaw's proud indeed! Such praises tend to make our children strive for more! Keep it up. Great dedication poem.
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: JESSIE'S THIRTEENTH
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Saturday, 20th May 2006 @ 02:57:42 AM AEST
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Emy~
Jessie's mighty proud having a special and kind loving mother like urself. A beautifully penned poem filled with love. Our kids grow up so fast. Treasure every moment Emy~
love ya sweet lady.
love n hugs,
~*Suzie Q*~ |
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Re: JESSIE'S THIRTEENTH
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by BigDaddy on
Saturday, 20th May 2006 @ 03:19:55 PM AEST
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Emy,
I am so sorry it took so long to read one of your poems. This poem was so simplistic, uncomplicated and clean. I did not have to read between any lines, easy to understand and filled with love and pride. I look forward to reading the rest of your poems.
Thanks, Big Daddy
P.S.
I have very much appreciated the time you have taken to read my poetry and post comments. Thanks for listening!
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Re: JESSIE'S THIRTEENTH
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 12:56:33 AM AEST
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What an equisite birthday dedication to your daughter Emy..
God bless you and her.. forever.. together~
Yours truly..
Billy
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Re: JESSIE'S THIRTEENTH
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by JGB on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 02:49:13 AM AEST
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My Little Lady!
I love it. |
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Re: JESSIE'S THIRTEENTH
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 08:27:39 AM AEST
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Beautiful dedication Emy .
My boys coming up 13 it only seems like yesterday he was being born.
J. |
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Re: JESSIE'S THIRTEENTH
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 03:34:09 PM AEST
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JESSIE'S THIRTEENTH comment for Emy:
Lovely poem, beautiful as ever. A joyous write, and I could just see that pretty girl singing. She is indeed well educated here on earth, her heart has taken much of life's love into her soul.
I Thought of myself at that age and my grandsons coming up soon.
I agree with ((((Lo2681))))), time does go quickly,
Lets all hug and love, write letters and poems and stories about and to all family members and friends everywhere, including net friends. Appeciate life, as your poem is all that.
Hugs,
RaquelLeah
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Re: JESSIE'S THIRTEENTH
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by bronzen on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 03:51:02 PM AEST
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| beautiful dedication you are unique sorry i never read until now not intentionally but pleasure is all mine |
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Re: JESSIE'S THIRTEENTH
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by artjunkiekyle on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 10:54:09 PM AEST
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| how sweet! this is beautiful |
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Re: JESSIE'S THIRTEENTH
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by SunRaise on
Thursday, 6th July 2006 @ 02:21:16 PM AEST
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I loved that poem so sweet very well written Keep up the work Maybe one day ull have a book of poems
Much Love
SunRaise |
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