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all i can think about is why i frown
no one will take a second look at me
how can they look an still not see?
maybe if someone had asked me why
maybe just maybe i wouldnt want to die
i fake this smile and hide my tears
i hide my pain and i hide my fears
with the razor i let my wrists drain
and as my blood goes, so goes my pain
nothing that i ever do is right
all i am is a worthless sight
i dont deserve the time of day
i hurt people with every word i say
this depression is just too much to bear
inside and out, im beginning to tear
i am sorry for ALL the pain i have caused you
Everyone hates me........ and i hate me too
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and i hated me too...

Contributed by xforever_faking_a_smile3x on Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 04:57:48 PM in AEST
Topic: self-harmpoetry

as i sit and watch the blood drip down
all i can think about is why i frown
no one will take a second look at me
how can they look an still not see?
maybe if someone had asked me why
maybe just maybe i wouldnt want to die
i fake this smile and hide my tears
i hide my pain and i hide my fears
with the razor i let my wrists drain
and as my blood goes, so goes my pain
nothing that i ever do is right
all i am is a worthless sight
i dont deserve the time of day
i hurt people with every word i say
this depression is just too much to bear
inside and out, im beginning to tear
i am sorry for ALL the pain i have caused you
Everyone hates me........ and i hate me too

Copyright © xforever_faking_a_smile3x ... [ 2006-05-17 16:57:48]
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Re: and i hated me too... (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinfullilmissmuppet on Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 06:09:24 PM AEST
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Listen I don't know what u've been trhough to write that and i'm not going to judge, its a relle sad poem and i just wanna give you some advice ok?....don't worry if u hate it u dont have to read it but i have been in ur state b4 and probably will again so i sorta understand a couple of the emotions at play here

"Try not to hate yourself, don't worry bout other people there are thousands of people in the world you will meet someone to whom u mean the world too, if i can have it happen so will you, If you hate yourself then it will be very hard for people to become frends with you because you won't feel that your worth it.
Ourselves are the only things we have in life, everything else is impermanent we are the only people we can rely on.... don't hate yourself because then you will have nothing to fall back on..... I know its hard n ur gunna read this and go its not that easy, but jus try aye i know its not easy it jus sounds easy put into words".....If you ever need to talk and can't find anyone else message me if you want i know that sounds ridiculous but i geniunely care about people in pain etc.....
xo
emma

Re: and i hated me too... (User Rating: 1 )
by Nessa_Lee on Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 08:09:32 PM AEST
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This was really unbelievable! It was such a good write. I know where your commin' from, i've been there too. But try to keep your head high!

~*~Nes~*~

Re: and i hated me too... (User Rating: 1 )
by Lilbabe on Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 10:02:50 AM AEST
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god....i love your poems! can't tell ya how many times i've said "everybody hates me & i hate me too" at least 100 times, seriously. another great write...
~lex~

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