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Night Speak (Absent Words)
Contributed by
Silent-No-More
on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 11:50:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Lying awake in the hush of the night
I move in closer, holding on tight
Clearing my mind of the clutter of day
I listen intently
For what you might say
And you whisper gently to me
Telling me then of a most precious dream
As you pull me still closer to you
Breathing out words
Meant just for us two
The night is breaking,
A new dawn awaits
My heart is aching
But Im feeling safe
Wrapped in your arms
Filled with the belief
That all that you are
Is all that I need
Lying together, there in the dark
Revealing ourselves and speaking our hearts
Your words embrace me and take me away
But I struggle to find
The right words to say
So I whisper softly to you
Trying to express a love that is true
My words can't compare to what you have said
As we lie there together
Safe in our bed
The night has broken
The dawn is now here
Ive barely spoken
But still, you hear
Half spoken whispers
Are all that you need
The words you decipher
When you kiss me
Lying together, in the new morning light
Awash in our passion and holding on tight
Speaking wordlessly with every touch
I tell you through silence
Ive never loved you so much
As we whispering with each caress
Intimately then, to each other confess
Foregoing words as they cannot convey
All of the things that
We are longing to say
The night has ended
And dawn has arrived
We lie, as intended
At each others side
As I sigh quietly
A new day begins
And understanding exactly
You kiss me
again
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Re: Night Speak (Absent Words)
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 02:49:48 AM AEST
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OMG!!! This is so incredibly sensual. Awesome, beautiful, inspiring, flowing, and such sweet tasteful love poem. Sensuality can speak a myriad of emotions to the hearts and you have done it perfectly.
Whoever this is about sure is a lucky guy. :-)
Thank you for letting the chicken out of the coup and sharing this with us. ;-)
Timber
:-)
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Re: Night Speak (Absent Words)
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by ButchHoward on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 09:47:35 AM AEST
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This is beautifully written and stirs the heart and soul deeply. There are times like this when words are just not needed. Just to be there and engage in communication on another level all together. "Speaking wordlessly with every touch" says it so perfectly. Speaking without words can convey all one needs to say and all one needs to hear:
"Foregoing words as they cannot convey
All of the things that
We are longing to say" These words written here are truly precious things; you have woven them to convey the warmth and magic of the moment. Congratulations on another masterpiece!
Butch
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Re: Night Speak (Absent Words)
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 02:59:41 PM AEST
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I was deeply touched clear to my tippy tippy toes!
Magnificent!
That's not the way we Senior do it, but then when you get as old as the ages.........what can one expect?
Wonderful, Indeed!
Warm love,
consue |
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Re: Night Speak (Absent Words)
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 08:20:02 PM AEST
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This is the first of your work i've read it won't be the last, a most beautiful peice of writting.
If i may suggest never be ashamed or feel u need 2 explain work as beautiful as this, as 4 using rhymes? well, as i said u need not explain. A beautiful style and presentation is what i see and the heart says the rest.
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Re: Night Speak (Absent Words)
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 08:59:39 AM AEST
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Obvious rhymes....lol ya know my friend, it isnt the rhymes, obvious or not, that make the write...its all the words preceeding them that slip into the heart and soul of the reader.....
and all your words were soft, tender, and wonderful.
I loved this. It's like an old love song that plays in the mind over and over again.
Beautifully done
Roses
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Re: Night Speak (Absent Words)
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 06:12:47 PM AEST
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Extremely passionate.Deep understanding,without the spoken word,is a wonderful thing.Wonderfully expressed here.
Obvious rhymes?..These open the heart,
Den |
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Re: Night Speak (Absent Words)
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 09:50:13 AM AEST
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Oh what a tender and loving poem!! Just what the doctor ordered- some peace and quiet and TLC.... This is quite a masterpiece you've produced here.
Jenni |
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Re: Night Speak (Absent Words)
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 02:22:30 PM AEST
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Snemmy , this was breathtakingly beautiful. It spoke profoundly to me. ..
I am at a loss to express just how soft and gentle and so positively
sensuous this piece really is. It speaks of a profound love.
A-love-that-I-have-waited-my-whole-life-for, kinda love.
How completely perfect. This night. I should hope to have a night
such as this ... sooner than later ...
Amazing emotion here.. in these words ..
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Re: Night Speak (Absent Words)
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by NDean on
Sunday, 10th December 2006 @ 07:49:59 AM AEST
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Sometimes the obvious rhymes work best, and this poem shows that. It flows and is so Real, if that makes sense.
Good Poem
Nathan |
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