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Array ( [sid] => 120164 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Cool My Head [time] => 2006-05-16 03:59:32 [hometext] => This is my obsession, i've been hiding from my poetry for a long time. I know have been forced out of hiding by these boiling emotions, PLEASE COOL MY HEAD? [bodytext] => Make me stop hurting
Make it stop wrenching my heart
Make me believe
That this won’t tear me apart

Make me see the reason
To this god forsaken rhyme
Make me see the beauty
So I see why im still this time

Make me smile, hold me close
I love you with all the capacity I own
Show me that it’s not in vain
Show me that im not all alone

Make me see my tears are pointless
Push them back into me
Wipe them away with a flick of your finger
And show me my stupidity

Make me stop my rapid thoughts
That fire impulses through my head
Cool my head down hold it in your hands
Please these thoughts burn I want to be dead

Make me feel the way you want me too feel
GET OUT OF MY HEAD GET OUT
Make me into your perfection
YOU FILL ME WITH DOUBT

Make me see this obsession for what it is
Eternal love, ilove you
Hold me close in an embrace of sweet insanity
Make me feel normal enough for us to be two
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Cool My Head

Contributed by Sinfullilmissmuppet on Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 03:59:32 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Make me stop hurting
Make it stop wrenching my heart
Make me believe
That this won’t tear me apart

Make me see the reason
To this god forsaken rhyme
Make me see the beauty
So I see why im still this time

Make me smile, hold me close
I love you with all the capacity I own
Show me that it’s not in vain
Show me that im not all alone

Make me see my tears are pointless
Push them back into me
Wipe them away with a flick of your finger
And show me my stupidity

Make me stop my rapid thoughts
That fire impulses through my head
Cool my head down hold it in your hands
Please these thoughts burn I want to be dead

Make me feel the way you want me too feel
GET OUT OF MY HEAD GET OUT
Make me into your perfection
YOU FILL ME WITH DOUBT

Make me see this obsession for what it is
Eternal love, ilove you
Hold me close in an embrace of sweet insanity
Make me feel normal enough for us to be two

Copyright Â© Sinfullilmissmuppet ... [ 2006-05-16 03:59:32]
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Re: Cool My Head (User Rating: 1 )
by desireemiote on Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 07:16:26 AM AEST
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Wonderful flow. If you are pushing someone away for the love of this person you talk about then stop. You obviously need to be loved. You need someone to help you through things and comfort you. If this person you love does not love you back, do not deny yourself other affection. Everyone needs someone to love them. Unrequitted love can be depressing and pull you in to believing that it's your fault but it's not. You can't force someone to feel love. It's either there or it's not. Give that other person a try if they are there. Just think of how they must feel standing on the side waiting for your affections while you obssess over your other love.
Megan(and her bun in the oven)

Re: Cool My Head (User Rating: 1 )
by Marrs on Friday, 21st March 2008 @ 05:26:17 PM AEST
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an interesting read

Re: Cool My Head (User Rating: 1 )
by CHARLAX on Monday, 31st March 2008 @ 12:00:06 PM AEST
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Edited due to plagiarism and disrespect toward the moderators. You know the rules, we have told you before that these posts will not be allowed, and that will not change. These posts WILL be deleted. Please do not disrespect the moderators in your posts again. - Moderator_16
eye just got this from another poem it was added in place of the poem what a way to go for a poem that is

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