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Array ( [sid] => 120122 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => this painted soul [time] => 2006-05-15 16:42:20 [hometext] => hello again [bodytext] => walking in sharp painted green forests while a gentle rain falls
stepping on paths that have been worn for years from exployers and animals
a sense of mystic creeps across my temple and overjoyment sets in
watching life merge to drink from the lilly laced pond
as tadpoles and frogs feed on the nurishment given to them
waiting for there mating call a sound that travels far in the name of nature
in the slight far off distance a swollen doe in her motherered glow
grazing in this painted view sound and sight to bear as tears roll down my caring eyes
showing me a feeling the is so pure and simple no more confusion on idle heart
a end to endless races and false idols as he nuture and imbrace swallow me whole to fill my soul [comments] => 2 [counter] => 251 [topic] => 73 [informant] => lostrelic [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )

this painted soul

Contributed by lostrelic on Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 04:42:20 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

walking in sharp painted green forests while a gentle rain falls
stepping on paths that have been worn for years from exployers and animals
a sense of mystic creeps across my temple and overjoyment sets in
watching life merge to drink from the lilly laced pond
as tadpoles and frogs feed on the nurishment given to them
waiting for there mating call a sound that travels far in the name of nature
in the slight far off distance a swollen doe in her motherered glow
grazing in this painted view sound and sight to bear as tears roll down my caring eyes
showing me a feeling the is so pure and simple no more confusion on idle heart
a end to endless races and false idols as he nuture and imbrace swallow me whole to fill my soul

Copyright © lostrelic ... [ 2006-05-15 16:42:20]
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Re: this painted soul (User Rating: 1 )
by desireemiote on Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 04:49:43 PM AEST
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Hello to you too:P
Megan(and her bun in the oven)

Re: this painted soul (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 11:00:15 AM AEST
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Beautiful write. Good to see you posting. Take care, brother. Peace, Laura

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