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Array ( [sid] => 119304 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => CONSEQUENTIAL ERROR OF FALLING FOR YOU [time] => 2006-05-01 12:53:25 [hometext] => more ramblings of lost love.... [bodytext] => You walk by and i smile a beautiful disguise
As i attempt to cover up the emptiness inside
The pain in my eyes contridicts my every move
I close my pools of sorrow that i see the world through
For someone so confident i really am so afraid
I don't see this reality justthe one that I create
To me hapiness is justa simple illusion
In my mind theres no colours so theres no confusion
Like a shattered mirror with my distorted pointof view
How could i have known that i'd fall in love with you?
Theres so many things wrong inside my head
All the time i'm living, living to be dead
Fear of losing. fear of loving fear of broken heart
These fears have become my own now that we're apart
But even when we were together you were never really there
i still miss your touch and you playing with my hair
If you see me around you'll know i'm somewhere else
somewhere deep inside my soul lostwithin myself
Yes, I'm like a shattered mirror with my distorted point of view
If only i had known the consequence of falling in love with you
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 231 [topic] => 22 [informant] => vickixcee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
CONSEQUENTIAL ERROR OF FALLING FOR YOU

Contributed by vickixcee on Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 12:53:25 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



You walk by and i smile a beautiful disguise
As i attempt to cover up the emptiness inside
The pain in my eyes contridicts my every move
I close my pools of sorrow that i see the world through
For someone so confident i really am so afraid
I don't see this reality justthe one that I create
To me hapiness is justa simple illusion
In my mind theres no colours so theres no confusion
Like a shattered mirror with my distorted pointof view
How could i have known that i'd fall in love with you?
Theres so many things wrong inside my head
All the time i'm living, living to be dead
Fear of losing. fear of loving fear of broken heart
These fears have become my own now that we're apart
But even when we were together you were never really there
i still miss your touch and you playing with my hair
If you see me around you'll know i'm somewhere else
somewhere deep inside my soul lostwithin myself
Yes, I'm like a shattered mirror with my distorted point of view
If only i had known the consequence of falling in love with you




Copyright © vickixcee ... [ 2006-05-01 12:53:25]
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Re: CONSEQUENTIAL ERROR OF FALLING FOR YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Jazzy on Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 12:59:06 PM AEST
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I really like this poem ... It's so familiar and easy to relate to ... keep writing ... I'll keep reading sweets ... muahz x0xJaZZyx0x


Re: CONSEQUENTIAL ERROR OF FALLING FOR YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by no_1nos_me on Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 06:55:58 PM AEST
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nice write ; > )




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