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Array ( [sid] => 118989 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Past [time] => 2006-04-26 01:07:06 [hometext] => IQ has little to do with emotional intelligence, otherwise i would'nt be here writing this [bodytext] => Stay awake, don't nod and dream
for dreams lead to images that transcend time,
a time during living that felt so sublime
But now looking back on the fruits of the past
one final bite, want the flavour to last
For its not like logic with a conscious choice,
its more than a feeling to hear your voice
Inclined to fall downward the reverse pastime spiral,
saliva the sweet infection; the sickness seems viral
Drawn to your aura i breathe you in
Features that pierce and puncture my heart
holes to be filled, yet further torn apart [comments] => 3 [counter] => 291 [topic] => 22 [informant] => jennm [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Past

Contributed by jennm on Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 01:07:06 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Stay awake, don't nod and dream
for dreams lead to images that transcend time,
a time during living that felt so sublime
But now looking back on the fruits of the past
one final bite, want the flavour to last
For its not like logic with a conscious choice,
its more than a feeling to hear your voice
Inclined to fall downward the reverse pastime spiral,
saliva the sweet infection; the sickness seems viral
Drawn to your aura i breathe you in
Features that pierce and puncture my heart
holes to be filled, yet further torn apart

Copyright © jennm ... [ 2006-04-26 01:07:06]
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Re: Past (User Rating: 1 )
by O7NeVeS on Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 01:42:37 AM AEST
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wow... great write!! Tanya

Re: Past (User Rating: 1 )
by expired_promises on Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 02:10:43 AM AEST
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wonderful poem

it has such a beautiful flow to it. i love the line "one final bite, want the flavour to last." isn't it true. and truth is beauty you know. you also end the poem on such a strong note.

one i will not soon forget. thank you.

Re: Past (User Rating: 1 )
by Dizza_13 on Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 03:12:48 AM AEST
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good stuff. great flow and ryhme. welcome to
YPDC

diz

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