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Array ( [sid] => 118938 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Trapped here alone [time] => 2006-04-24 22:13:26 [hometext] => When you just have a day ...where nothing makes sence....and you dont really know why... [bodytext] => Trapped here alone
Stuck in this hell
Left torn to pieces
From when I first fell

Can’t see straight
Will never breathe right
Its getting cold
Can’t win the fight

Cast out in the world
Without a helping hand
Fallen on the floor
Can’t find the strength to stand

I need something here
I need something now
My life feels so empty
But I don’t know how

I need the tension of love
Don’t think my heart will let it in
Because everything went so black
Like my life was purged in sin

The days toll on
The nights they slip away
My eyes are craving color
But all they see is grey

Depression is too low
But happiness is just too high
I can find no in-between
While in this melancholy sigh

My heart grows dim
I can find no reason to stay
The only thing that remains
Is this everlasting day [comments] => 1 [counter] => 221 [topic] => 13 [informant] => whatsername [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Trapped here alone

Contributed by whatsername on Monday, 24th April 2006 @ 10:13:26 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Trapped here alone
Stuck in this hell
Left torn to pieces
From when I first fell

Can’t see straight
Will never breathe right
Its getting cold
Can’t win the fight

Cast out in the world
Without a helping hand
Fallen on the floor
Can’t find the strength to stand

I need something here
I need something now
My life feels so empty
But I don’t know how

I need the tension of love
Don’t think my heart will let it in
Because everything went so black
Like my life was purged in sin

The days toll on
The nights they slip away
My eyes are craving color
But all they see is grey

Depression is too low
But happiness is just too high
I can find no in-between
While in this melancholy sigh

My heart grows dim
I can find no reason to stay
The only thing that remains
Is this everlasting day




Copyright © whatsername ... [ 2006-04-24 22:13:26]
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Re: Trapped here alone (User Rating: 1 )
by sicknivesevered on Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 02:46:35 AM AEST
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Nice poem. I like the lines,

"My eyes are craving color
But all they see is grey"

...it's pretty groovy.




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