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Wishing of long terms and goals
Paths that are taken...Not completed
Overwhelm of ones heart
But has it been seen?

What does one know,really
have they captured the "full you"

From the words that are taken...within
Make the inner ...CRY
Filling full of happiness, yet knowing its not the "REAL"
Tell me how the heart can be opened
Tell me how it can be filled

For I am on the path...of sadness
Not a return back........."sighs"

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EMPTINESS WHICH LIES WITHIN

Contributed by brew on Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 09:11:57 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

Stages of one who dreams
Wishing of long terms and goals
Paths that are taken...Not completed
Overwhelm of ones heart
But has it been seen?

What does one know,really
have they captured the "full you"

From the words that are taken...within
Make the inner ...CRY
Filling full of happiness, yet knowing its not the "REAL"
Tell me how the heart can be opened
Tell me how it can be filled

For I am on the path...of sadness
Not a return back........."sighs"

Copyright © brew ... [ 2006-04-20 21:11:57]
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Re: EMPTINESS WHICH LIES WITHIN (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 09:36:21 PM AEST
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Interesting write, Brew.. Hope all is well with you.
Say hi to MountainHigh for me when next you talk... Tell him I will call soon....
Hugs
Jenni

Re: EMPTINESS WHICH LIES WITHIN (User Rating: 1 )
by redtears on Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 09:45:14 PM AEST
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i really liked the last bit, actually the whole thing was crazy! keep writing!

Re: EMPTINESS WHICH LIES WITHIN (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 11:11:07 PM AEST
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The longing and questions so rich throughout this write, I hope tha your ok.
Michelle

Re: EMPTINESS WHICH LIES WITHIN (User Rating: 1 )
by halli on Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 03:52:40 PM AEST
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i hope everything is well with you. nice poem though i hope the tone i noted isn't true. well if u need to talk im here always if not in person in spirt ok. love always

hugs
~halli

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