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Array ( [sid] => 118568 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => love's taken me back [time] => 2006-04-18 17:34:38 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I opened my eyes and it was all a dream
Frustration and anger filled my throat
with intent to scream
I can't even think of my problems cause they're only of yours
Your burdens are mine
In my heart the pain and confusion pours

What should we do
where should we go
we'll always have to fun
and the future we'll never know
Please guide me,
I'm depending on you
You're such a smart person
What should we do?
Everything says not to be together
but I don't give up
cause I truely love you

Can love concor the past
When the present we can't seem to see
And reverse the hate and anger between our family
They don't know what we have seen or what we feel
Only you and I really now the truth
If this love is real
So lets show them the love we have for each other
No need to regret, remorse or look for another
Cause I'm here with arms wide open,
but a brused and dented heart
But I can't be without you
We can't be apart
This love is rare, but worth the pain inside
to undue and repair, feelings that may have lied
marly
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 196 [topic] => 24 [informant] => marly [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )
love's taken me back

Contributed by marly on Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 05:34:38 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



I opened my eyes and it was all a dream
Frustration and anger filled my throat
with intent to scream
I can't even think of my problems cause they're only of yours
Your burdens are mine
In my heart the pain and confusion pours

What should we do
where should we go
we'll always have to fun
and the future we'll never know
Please guide me,
I'm depending on you
You're such a smart person
What should we do?
Everything says not to be together
but I don't give up
cause I truely love you

Can love concor the past
When the present we can't seem to see
And reverse the hate and anger between our family
They don't know what we have seen or what we feel
Only you and I really now the truth
If this love is real
So lets show them the love we have for each other
No need to regret, remorse or look for another
Cause I'm here with arms wide open,
but a brused and dented heart
But I can't be without you
We can't be apart
This love is rare, but worth the pain inside
to undue and repair, feelings that may have lied
marly




Copyright © marly ... [ 2006-04-18 17:34:38]
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Re: love's taken me back (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 08:29:03 PM AEST
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very felt poem.. very sad but shows the feeling of love in this.. great job in expression thanks for sharing

JENNI


Re: love's taken me back (User Rating: 1 )
by katt on Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 10:29:36 AM AEST
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Hate and anger between the family....sort of like Romeo and Juliet. Enjoyed it.

katt




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