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Down into her view.
Shes crying and screaming.
Thinking what else can i do?
She punches the wall,
As she sings to the sound.
Turns the radio up,
And falls to the ground.
It's her boyfriends song,
The one who has died.
The one she still misses,
And for who she still cries.
As she slowly sits up,
And the songs starts to end.
She can't help but to think,
How she lost her best friend.
So she picks up the razor,
Slides it against the bluest vein.
In hoping that when she does,
It will finally end her pain.
She can't help but to think,
Is this really right.
But theres nothing she can do,
As shes slwoly losing sight.
She knows she can't go back,
But shes not moving any farther.
The blood is getting thick,
And her light keeps getting darker.
Shes thinking of her memories,
Enjoying thoughts of her past.
A memory of her boyfriend,
This memory was her last.

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Memory Of Her Boyfriend

Contributed by xDiSaStErPiEcEx on Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 04:25:42 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Aa her black hair falls,
Down into her view.
Shes crying and screaming.
Thinking what else can i do?
She punches the wall,
As she sings to the sound.
Turns the radio up,
And falls to the ground.
It's her boyfriends song,
The one who has died.
The one she still misses,
And for who she still cries.
As she slowly sits up,
And the songs starts to end.
She can't help but to think,
How she lost her best friend.
So she picks up the razor,
Slides it against the bluest vein.
In hoping that when she does,
It will finally end her pain.
She can't help but to think,
Is this really right.
But theres nothing she can do,
As shes slwoly losing sight.
She knows she can't go back,
But shes not moving any farther.
The blood is getting thick,
And her light keeps getting darker.
Shes thinking of her memories,
Enjoying thoughts of her past.
A memory of her boyfriend,
This memory was her last.

The End.

Copyright © xDiSaStErPiEcEx ... [ 2006-04-16 16:25:42]
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Re: Memory Of Her Boyfriend (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 05:05:19 PM AEST
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wow, a tragic kind of love story.
i likehow it flows and how the ending isnt happy, becuase in real life, it almost never is.
you've got potential , keep up the great work!

Re: Memory Of Her Boyfriend (User Rating: 1 )
by coolbreeze17 on Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 10:28:52 PM AEST
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This brought tears to my eyes

very sad very well written

Re: Memory Of Her Boyfriend (User Rating: 1 )
by Craze on Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 07:24:58 AM AEST
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I have read this poem dozens of times and love it each time even more than the last

Re: Memory Of Her Boyfriend (User Rating: 1 )
by Lilbabe on Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 04:25:22 PM AEST
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this was beautifully written...and yet so sad. i love it.
lexy

Re: Memory Of Her Boyfriend (User Rating: 1 )
by Craze on Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 09:36:29 AM AEST
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i dont care what anyone says u have the best poem on this sight i am a fan and will always love this poem.
yours truly,
Max

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