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Array ( [sid] => 118330 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Desperation from sorrow [time] => 2006-04-14 17:04:30 [hometext] => Not sure why i wrote this, It just came to me so I wrote it down. [bodytext] => I feel the pain, as i push it against my vein
Pain is my asprin
Releaving me of all my stress
Starts to bleed, as I feel it going deeper

A fountain of red springs from my arm
Its so beautifull, i cant help but smile
This pain is all I know
The only thing I feel
The only thing I show

Hatred is what im full of
People around me can see it
And people that take the time to get to know me
See my good side
For it is with them, I do abide

Though I may be bitter
Im no ordinary critter
Im insane, thats what they say
I am crazy no doubt today
I need to know that someone cares
I just cant see any good in myself
When i look all I see is hate,pain and sorrow
Maybe all this will change tomorrow

How can I be so enslaved
By the system I helped engrave
I am just a failure, no good found here
Only darkness, and hate my dear

For I am alone, in this great depression
I am alone only she is my great obssesion
I need to find a place to stay
Somewhere far far away
Lurking deep within my mind
My only escape is the one you helped me create

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Desperation from sorrow

Contributed by Michael_Bevins on Friday, 14th April 2006 @ 05:04:30 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I feel the pain, as i push it against my vein
Pain is my asprin
Releaving me of all my stress
Starts to bleed, as I feel it going deeper

A fountain of red springs from my arm
Its so beautifull, i cant help but smile
This pain is all I know
The only thing I feel
The only thing I show

Hatred is what im full of
People around me can see it
And people that take the time to get to know me
See my good side
For it is with them, I do abide

Though I may be bitter
Im no ordinary critter
Im insane, thats what they say
I am crazy no doubt today
I need to know that someone cares
I just cant see any good in myself
When i look all I see is hate,pain and sorrow
Maybe all this will change tomorrow

How can I be so enslaved
By the system I helped engrave
I am just a failure, no good found here
Only darkness, and hate my dear

For I am alone, in this great depression
I am alone only she is my great obssesion
I need to find a place to stay
Somewhere far far away
Lurking deep within my mind
My only escape is the one you helped me create





Copyright © Michael_Bevins ... [ 2006-04-14 17:04:30]
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Re: Desperation from sorrow (User Rating: 1 )
by oreo910 on Friday, 14th April 2006 @ 05:25:21 PM AEST
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B-E-A-UTIFUL!!! Glad u took the time 2 write it down! It's a marvelous masterpiece!!!!


Re: Desperation from sorrow (User Rating: 1 )
by twick on Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 02:40:28 AM AEST
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"I just can't see any good in myself"

I wrote those very same things today in my journal. I don't mean to say the classic, "hey everyone feels this way its nothing new" but there is that wish to convey mutual understanding. I see that in this poem.




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