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[sid] => 118307
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[aid] => mick
[title] => Questions
[time] => 2006-04-14 09:52:25
[hometext] => i havent ever written anything like this, please critique it..
[bodytext] => have you ever dared to ask them why? to ask if they were aware that they made you cry? are you too scared? or are you just shy? do you want the truth bared? or will you deny? did you think that they cared? or that they would never lie? did you think that what yall shared could just shrivel up and die? did you think that when they stared they were looking in your eyes? did you think it was fair when they told you bye? did you think that that one prayer would bring them back in your life? did you think that yall were prepared to overcome all strife? did you think nothing compared to the love you felt inside? do you think that your despair can be ended with that knife? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 270 [topic] => 75 [informant] => bigduck6769 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )
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