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rhetorical love
Contributed by
candyistoo-sweet
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Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 08:19:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Dont worry about me I am confused
I thought I wanted to be in love but I am scared
Please dont take it personal when I say I am busy
Dont take it personally
Its lonely trying to explain that your confidence makes me weary
Its discerning trying to act nonchalant when your kiss
Your kiss makes me fall all over me.
I am getting out of this town
I will try to escape all my feelings
I am not ok
I am looking for your love in different places
In different faces
I wish I could trust myself to start something new
But I am fickle and not yet sure of me and you
I dont know what will become of me in the future
Next year I could be completely different than what you knew.
Please dont ever change for anyone
You are perfect.
One day you will love someone so hard it will hurt
I dont want it to be me for that I am just not worth
I am not worth a lifetime of bliss
All I am worth is to barely get by on broken promises
I dont see myself sad but not happy either.
I hope you have fun halfway across the world
Open your mind to everything that makes you insecure
Dont let anyone make you angry or sad
Half the battle with your emotions is to walk away glad
Defined.
If anyone breaks your heart but me
I will hurt them if thats what you want it to be
I am not afraid of anyone but you
I fear your kind words you are to kind for my own good.
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Re: rhetorical love
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by dayslong on
Monday, 10th April 2006 @ 01:07:24 AM AEST
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" am looking for your love in different places
In different faces" - I really loved that line. I also enjoyed this poem, The meter flows really well in the beginning and end, but is a bit long-winded in the middle and last lines.
I like the original way you chose to communicate with this though. And on a more personal note, with all the love poems about being dumped out there, or losing a love, it's really nice to read one from the other point of view. |
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