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over periods of time
I am his
He is mine
Love flows through
our hearts completion inside
where once was emptiness there

you parted on your way searching for
something and gave me away to the nothingness
letting me fill the void
where you once were

to this day I search for that missing piece
inside that keeps me from being full.. that missing
piece is you

Even though it didn't last
I experienced the greatness of true love
for that I am grateful within
but your not here
I feel so lost without

I know inside
our souls are intwined
and someday you will return to me
for you are mine

JENNI [comments] => 8 [counter] => 311 [topic] => 48 [informant] => PhantomVampyress [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 26 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Souls intwined

Contributed by PhantomVampyress on Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 09:00:31 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Souls intwined
over periods of time
I am his
He is mine
Love flows through
our hearts completion inside
where once was emptiness there

you parted on your way searching for
something and gave me away to the nothingness
letting me fill the void
where you once were

to this day I search for that missing piece
inside that keeps me from being full.. that missing
piece is you

Even though it didn't last
I experienced the greatness of true love
for that I am grateful within
but your not here
I feel so lost without

I know inside
our souls are intwined
and someday you will return to me
for you are mine

JENNI

Copyright © PhantomVampyress ... [ 2006-04-01 21:00:31]
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Re: Souls intwined (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 09:39:06 PM AEST
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this is beautiful Jen, I hope he returns to you.

Michelle

Re: Souls intwined (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 12:50:16 AM AEST
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Another good one Jenni, really well done.

J.

Re: Souls intwined (User Rating: 1 )
by BaByBaNaNa on Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 04:19:07 AM AEST
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this is a beautiful poem, i hope whoever you are writing about returns to you

Re: Souls intwined (User Rating: 1 )
by Jen54 on Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 10:54:48 PM AEST
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I can relate to this so much it is kinda scary. It gave me a few butterflies in my stomach. Keep it up!!

-Jen

Re: Souls intwined (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 11:43:52 PM AEST
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Your writting is like aged wine 4 one so young. Crafted skilfully by the hearts own hand. most sincere in it's expression.

Ben

Re: Souls intwined (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Thursday, 27th July 2006 @ 02:28:15 PM AEST
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You gave this an uplifting ending, you don't usually see that when you hear someone's parted. This was a nice read, full of sentiment and hope, which is always a pleasure to read.

Re: Souls intwined (User Rating: 1 )
by Uncertain_Oblivion on Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 12:02:33 PM AEST
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This was so beautifully sad. I loved it.
Gorgeous...simply.

Re: Souls intwined (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 04:43:16 PM AEST
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I read this twice i gotta say i realy enjoyed it hope you have more new stuff i'm running out of your poems to read and comment on lol. Truly a deep sentiment in this poem, a well crafted artist you are.

thank you also for your comment.

myheartsvoice

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