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She has lost herself
Her senses start to slow

Memories come harder each day
More often than not she
Seems to lose her way

Traveling on lacey threads
Broken dreams fall
As she silently treads

Stardust blows past
Her mind grows narrow
Moments never last

Caught in insanity
Once more unrelenting
Time to set her spirit free

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Dazed

Contributed by NoSaint on Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 10:15:50 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

Cradled in times amber glow
She has lost herself
Her senses start to slow

Memories come harder each day
More often than not she
Seems to lose her way

Traveling on lacey threads
Broken dreams fall
As she silently treads

Stardust blows past
Her mind grows narrow
Moments never last

Caught in insanity
Once more unrelenting
Time to set her spirit free

Copyright © NoSaint ... [ 2006-03-25 22:15:50]
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Re: Dazed (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 10:19:48 PM AEST
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OMG Shari, this took me to so many of my elderly patients I use to care for. Such sadness. What a sadly tender write. Thanks for sharing. Peace, Laura

Re: Dazed (User Rating: 1 )
by sally-heart-jack on Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 02:31:26 AM AEST
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I really do like this one.

Good job.

Re: Dazed (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 10:06:35 AM AEST
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Great write Shari....Mike

Re: Dazed (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 06:50:16 PM AEST
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Yes indeed Shari this is a great w rite.
But even the loss of memory rings the eternal truth home that the mind itself is not what we are.
Is only part ;of the clay no matter how highly appreciated. The spirit triumphs when mind fails.
Great write
Elizabeth Dandy

Re: Dazed (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 02:54:54 AM AEST
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i agree with elizabeth dandy....the loss of memories does bring other things...amazing write.

Re: Dazed (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 06:00:13 AM AEST
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I use to work in a nursing home and like Laura it reminded me of some of the elderly people I cared for, it also bought back memories of my mother towards the end, you could see the confusion in her eyes.

Excellent writing.

J.

Re: Dazed (User Rating: 1 )
by JGB on Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 01:12:43 PM AEST
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Beautifully written
Sad
It brings back memories of loved ones.
I love it.

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