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Array ( [sid] => 116878 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => No Amount of words [time] => 2006-03-22 21:40:38 [hometext] => This is to those who have continued to read my poetry during the last year when I have gone through tough times [bodytext] => When you look out over the valley
and see the clear blue sea
no amount of words descibes
the view that can be seen
It is just like that my friends
when e''re i think of you
you always come through for me
even when I act a fool

I don''t deserve the praise you give to me
I hope that someday I can give what you''ve given to me

As we watch the brilliant colors
when our day comes to an end
and we sigh because we can not find
the words to compliment
It is how I feel about you
and your loyalty to me
when e''re i think about you
my thoughts fill up with glee

As the earth speeds on its journey
and we know not where it goes
but we trust that it will lead us
to a place good crops will grow
In my heart I hope our journeys
will keep us real strong as friends
Thanks for standing by me
even til the bitter end

There are no words I can say to make it known
What it means to me the friendship you have shown

I will try to say it much more personally
but for now I hope this poem
will say the words for me

As iron sharpens iron so you have sharpened me
I am always in your debt for what you''ve done for me



____________________________________________________________________________________________



There is a debt that can not be repayed
except through thank you
When a friend stands by a friend
during tough times
Rough currents still lie
far ahead of me
but peace will also soon abide
Where we can drink the waters of refreshing
with those who say "i still am your friend"
I hope one day that I can do the same thing
when broken times make hearts hard to mend. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 312 [topic] => 55 [informant] => Archie [notes] => Edited for spelling as requested. - Moderator_16 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )
No Amount of words

Contributed by Archie on Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 09:40:38 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



When you look out over the valley
and see the clear blue sea
no amount of words descibes
the view that can be seen
It is just like that my friends
when e''re i think of you
you always come through for me
even when I act a fool

I don''t deserve the praise you give to me
I hope that someday I can give what you''ve given to me

As we watch the brilliant colors
when our day comes to an end
and we sigh because we can not find
the words to compliment
It is how I feel about you
and your loyalty to me
when e''re i think about you
my thoughts fill up with glee

As the earth speeds on its journey
and we know not where it goes
but we trust that it will lead us
to a place good crops will grow
In my heart I hope our journeys
will keep us real strong as friends
Thanks for standing by me
even til the bitter end

There are no words I can say to make it known
What it means to me the friendship you have shown

I will try to say it much more personally
but for now I hope this poem
will say the words for me

As iron sharpens iron so you have sharpened me
I am always in your debt for what you''ve done for me



____________________________________________________________________________________________



There is a debt that can not be repayed
except through thank you
When a friend stands by a friend
during tough times
Rough currents still lie
far ahead of me
but peace will also soon abide
Where we can drink the waters of refreshing
with those who say "i still am your friend"
I hope one day that I can do the same thing
when broken times make hearts hard to mend.




Copyright © Archie ... [ 2006-03-22 21:40:38]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: No Amount of words (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 09:45:53 PM AEST
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wow this is a moving write.. this is very powerful and heart felt.. im sure that person appreciates your thanks.. beautiful write archie.. i also loved the flow of this.. beautiful expression too .. thanks for sharing it

JENNI


Re: No Amount of words (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 10:21:37 PM AEST
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Wonderful.........Hey glad to see you posting again. You do HAVE talent. You are one who I will continue to read and alwys be happy to see.:)

Brew~


Re: No Amount of words (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 11:51:23 PM AEST
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Beautiful and touching. True friends are priceless,

LG


Re: No Amount of words (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 08:13:19 PM AEST
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This writing is lovely Archie........I feel your gratitude, and when you receive friendship from another, it's because you yourself has been a good friend too!
Thanking you Archie for all your fine comments on my poems, like you, I value a good friend like you
Warm love
consue


Re: No Amount of words (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 12:16:19 AM AEST
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"I hope that someday I can give what you''ve given to me"


Well, I think you just did, Archie. This is a wonderful dedication. You are a good poet and a good man, Archie.

*applauds*

Thank you very much.

Tim
:-)


Re: No Amount of words (User Rating: 1 )
by sandypoet on Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 08:11:20 PM AEST
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We all go through a lot. Sometimes we wonder if we will ever get through the storm. But later we always can look back and see God's hand leading us out of it. Keep writing. Keep lifting us up through your words. It is nice to know we are not the only ones going through stuff.




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