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Whether it's wrong or right
Contributed by
Alison
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Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 02:20:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Whether its wrong or right,
In the end it doesnt matter,
I feel myself giving up,
Im lost in the sea of lies or truth,
I no longer can find the difference,
If I was smart they say I would give in,
To all my demons fighting against me,
Those horrid little demons riding on the tide of doubt,
With the vastness of the sea surrounding me,
Soon I may be drowned.
Whether its wrong or right,
In the end it doesnt matter,
In the end Im always engulfed in betrayal,
You will never be loved!
The waves of their voices repeat,
Up and down Im carried far from the ground,
Wet, cold, abandon, shaking in the water,
Im coming to except my fate,
As the demons grow louder,
I dont have anything else left to believe.
Whether its wrong or right,
In the end it doesnt matter,
Tears for companions,
I let myself sink,
Water rushing in my mouth, down my throat,
Stillness all around, strangely claim underneath,
Ive lost the fight,
All the demons must be right,
For what they say is all Ive ever known,
I simply cant refute it any longer.
Whether its wrong or right,
In the end it doesnt matter.
Copyright ©
Alison
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2006-03-22 02:20:09]
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Re: Whether it's wrong or right
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by whiteleo1984 on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 02:28:38 AM AEST
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| dont let the demons win!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Re: Whether it's wrong or right
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by dougnut on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 02:30:05 AM AEST
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I can feel the pain and sadness in this poem
of self questioning. I can empathise with you. have been there myself.
You have expressed your self very well. Good read and write.
no light at the end of the tunnel, Somedays could not even see the tunnel.!
IN THE END IT DOES MATTER..
YOU are important and must put YOU first.
Good luck ,Day at a time sometimes an hour at a time.
God Bless You
Dougnut |
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Re: Whether it's wrong or right
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 03:23:47 AM AEST
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shut up vampire_queen.
I thought this poem was deep and very well put together. |
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