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I wrote this trying to symbolise the need for me to lose this depression before I indeed rot away…

Diving into the utter silence of my head,
Swimming through memories, I tried to forget,
I've searched and searched for a time that I wasn't dead,
A time that I was alive and without any regret.

Breathe in…

I filter through my childhood searching for the prize,
Of when I was with someone that I had respected,
All the roads I travelled down all lead to false happiness and lies,
All of the memories that went by me showed me being rejected.

Release…

I wake up from my meditation again with no finds,
Maybe I will find it tomorrow maybe, maybe not,
Anyway, it's about time to go to where the sun shines,
And get out of the shadows before I rot.

-Jason
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Never-ending Search

Contributed by Astralbermudian on Saturday, 18th March 2006 @ 05:55:07 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Never-ending Search

I wrote this trying to symbolise the need for me to lose this depression before I indeed rot away…

Diving into the utter silence of my head,
Swimming through memories, I tried to forget,
I've searched and searched for a time that I wasn't dead,
A time that I was alive and without any regret.

Breathe in…

I filter through my childhood searching for the prize,
Of when I was with someone that I had respected,
All the roads I travelled down all lead to false happiness and lies,
All of the memories that went by me showed me being rejected.

Release…

I wake up from my meditation again with no finds,
Maybe I will find it tomorrow maybe, maybe not,
Anyway, it's about time to go to where the sun shines,
And get out of the shadows before I rot.

-Jason

Copyright Â© Astralbermudian ... [ 2006-03-18 05:55:07]
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Re: Never-ending Search (User Rating: 1 )
by thesinner on Saturday, 18th March 2006 @ 07:27:18 AM AEST
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I can relate. It's an ongoing battle for some of us. You expressed yourself well here.I hope you find the happiness you seek. Well done.

Re: Never-ending Search (User Rating: 1 )
by stew777 on Saturday, 18th March 2006 @ 07:32:43 AM AEST
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Keep searching & writing down your thoughts

Great write and thoughtful words.

I have been where you are now and have

been able to move on It takes Time .

Look forward not back if you can..

God Bless and Good Luck..

Re: Never-ending Search (User Rating: 1 )
by chaos78 on Saturday, 18th March 2006 @ 08:36:31 AM AEST
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i know how you feel but hopefully in time you can heal for some of us are still waiting

Re: Never-ending Search (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Saturday, 18th March 2006 @ 08:51:01 AM AEST
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a poem I can relate to, well done

Re: Never-ending Search (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 05:40:09 PM AEST
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This poem speaks to me. You did a great job in writing these emotions on paper!

Re: Never-ending Search (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Friday, 21st April 2006 @ 09:20:34 AM AEST
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You will find, and we all do lots of soul seraching, one time, or another.! Keep going, keep searching, yet...Dont let it get out of context.! Loved the post.

Brew~

Re: Never-ending Search (User Rating: 1 )
by ludders on Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 01:51:11 PM AEST
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ha ha, hey jason you rock, no seriously good poem but if you want to get better try reading some o mine (ludders) nah just playing, seriously its a really good poem in which th central message has come across well

Re: Never-ending Search (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 10:34:54 PM AEST
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Awesome writing.
huggs,
emy

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