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Bring It Back
Contributed by
merry
on
Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 04:40:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Hold onto to happiness as long as you can
Rope burns on your hands until they bleed
If you fall I'll catch you in you my heart
Let's pretend a little while longer
We can make it through this place
Restless souls without a plan
We stumbled in but we can't get out
Too late to change our minds
This place isn't paradise
Let's pretend we can make it if we try
I've given everything I've got
Broken wings and girlish things
Tossed away on a whim so long ago
Your reflection crosses my mind
Serious bue eyes as deep as the sea
I've been waiting such a long time
Tell me what it's all about
I've lost my heart so many times
You might find it
Bring it back to me
Copyright ©
merry
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2006-03-17 16:40:19]
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Re: Bring It Back
(User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on
Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 06:32:59 AM AEST
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Yes, spill it all out on the page, in all its mess and regret. I'm going to comment on everyone of your bloody poems that no-one else seems to have the sense to read and remark on, and kick start them all with a 5 from 5.
It may take some time.
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