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Array ( [sid] => 116157 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => What I Say To Hide What I Am Feeing Inside [time] => 2006-03-09 21:59:54 [hometext] => I know this is not a great poem. But i have so many mixed emotions right now. I cant think right!!! [bodytext] => I fee so great today,
“You know you feel like *****!”
I can' believe I look so good in this outfit,
“You call that looking good, No wonder you cant get a guy!”
My hair feels so soft, I think I like it this short,
“Lord please, You look like a total dyke!”
I cant believe I was once suicidal,
“I can, you know you life is a living hell!”
I don’t know why I wear makeup, I look so pretty without it.
“That face is the same ugly face that Satan has, Makeup does no good for you!”
I wonder if he likes me, I think I am pretty enough for him,
“He likes skinny big breasted girls, Not fat flat chested chicks!”
I hope I pass this test,
“You know you won't pass, You are not smart enough!”
Wow the shirt looks great on her,
“I have never seen something that disgusting in my life!”
I wish people would see me as a great person,
“Not like anyone will ever notice you in your lifetime!”
I can't wait to get my first tattoo it will look fabulous,
“Please that would make people think more hateful things toward you!”
I wish I could really feel great about myself for once,
“Now that is what I have been trying to tell you!” [comments] => 1 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 61 [informant] => BloodyTearDrops [notes] => Edited for Spelling as Requested by Moderator_15 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

What I Say To Hide What I Am Feeing Inside

Contributed by BloodyTearDrops on Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 09:59:54 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

I fee so great today,
“You know you feel like *****!”
I can' believe I look so good in this outfit,
“You call that looking good, No wonder you cant get a guy!”
My hair feels so soft, I think I like it this short,
“Lord please, You look like a total dyke!”
I cant believe I was once suicidal,
“I can, you know you life is a living hell!”
I don’t know why I wear makeup, I look so pretty without it.
“That face is the same ugly face that Satan has, Makeup does no good for you!”
I wonder if he likes me, I think I am pretty enough for him,
“He likes skinny big breasted girls, Not fat flat chested chicks!”
I hope I pass this test,
“You know you won't pass, You are not smart enough!”
Wow the shirt looks great on her,
“I have never seen something that disgusting in my life!”
I wish people would see me as a great person,
“Not like anyone will ever notice you in your lifetime!”
I can't wait to get my first tattoo it will look fabulous,
“Please that would make people think more hateful things toward you!”
I wish I could really feel great about myself for once,
“Now that is what I have been trying to tell you!”

Copyright Â© BloodyTearDrops ... [ 2006-03-09 21:59:54]
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Re: What I Say To Hide What I Am Feeing Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 10:14:54 PM AEST
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Nice poem, good job..

Two voices in one, alter egos, effective dialogue.. I hear two separate people, yet connected.
Shape and form merged here is very intense, very subjective.

raquelLeah

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