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[aid] => mick
[title] => Melting into Yesterday
[time] => 2006-03-08 19:06:09
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[bodytext] => I want your hands to melt into my skin once more, Creating imprints of your thoughts, Of your desire against the small of my back, My hands, My waist. Drift your lips down to my ear And whisper words the music steals. I want to look into your eyes And see those flames of passion, Burning so hot my cheeks flame red As you brush away my doubts. I didn’t know a song could kidnap me And leave me stranded in your world of movements. You know how to dance exactly so my curves blend in with yours Until we are one body brought together by music. Your cheek rests by mine And your breath escapes in fast beats against my ear. Your hands are molded into my flesh, Dripping with sweat, yet your fingers fail to slide off. A burst of light explodes between our gaze And the music is dead. I walk away first. I always walk away first. Mistakes are my specialties I’m the queen of Faults, Errors, Slip-ups And disaster. You walked out that door and I didn’t bother to stop you. Now… Your face faded from my memory But your touch still burns on my skin. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 43 [informant] => xxbreathlessx [notes] => Comment moved over from second submission. - Moderator_16: Re: Melting into Yesterday (User Rating: 1) by drtylilsecret on Wednesday, March 08 2006 @ 19:09:59 CST (User Info | Send a Message) amazing write! omg the first stanza left me breathless, and the other two made it sort of sad but that's just life, and with them you gave it that voice that it need. i absolutely loved it. ~natalya [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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