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Array ( [sid] => 116053 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Have You--- [time] => 2006-03-08 02:44:35 [hometext] => *sigh*--*you know things are not going well when i've posted 3 poems in the past 4 days* [bodytext] => I have you to blame
(for everything)
I have you to thank,
(for so much)
You saved me,
(I should've never let you)
You destroyed me,
(Cause I allowed you to)
I ran to you,
(I was so weak)
I fled from you,
(No, too scared)
You were so sweet,

You were much too cruel

Because this soul has been stripped
Of every last emotion,
Left naked for the world to see,
With nobody to cloth it,
Nobody to care,
Fragile as glass,
Deligate as a rose,
Yet as hidden as treasure

Too many feelings spent,
(On you....)
Too much time wasted,
(Wondering...)
Too much love thrown away,
(Hurt by you....)
Too many tears released.
(Because i trusted you....)

I have you to blame,
(For everything)
I have you to thank,
(For so much)
Because now i know
I won't make the same mistake again,
I won't run to you,
I'll run away,
You won't save me,
I won't give you the chance
You won't destroy me,
I'll destroy you,
You were bitter sweet,
But so's the ending,

I have you to blame
I have you to thank [comments] => 7 [counter] => 297 [topic] => 6 [informant] => drtylilsecret [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

I Have You---

Contributed by drtylilsecret on Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 02:44:35 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

I have you to blame
(for everything)
I have you to thank,
(for so much)
You saved me,
(I should've never let you)
You destroyed me,
(Cause I allowed you to)
I ran to you,
(I was so weak)
I fled from you,
(No, too scared)
You were so sweet,

You were much too cruel

Because this soul has been stripped
Of every last emotion,
Left naked for the world to see,
With nobody to cloth it,
Nobody to care,
Fragile as glass,
Deligate as a rose,
Yet as hidden as treasure

Too many feelings spent,
(On you....)
Too much time wasted,
(Wondering...)
Too much love thrown away,
(Hurt by you....)
Too many tears released.
(Because i trusted you....)

I have you to blame,
(For everything)
I have you to thank,
(For so much)
Because now i know
I won't make the same mistake again,
I won't run to you,
I'll run away,
You won't save me,
I won't give you the chance
You won't destroy me,
I'll destroy you,
You were bitter sweet,
But so's the ending,

I have you to blame
I have you to thank

Copyright © drtylilsecret ... [ 2006-03-08 02:44:35]
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Re: I Have You--- (User Rating: 1 )
by Kano on Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 02:55:23 AM AEST
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Well you are doing better than me, I think I have posted five in the last few months. Great poem I really like this one. It is true you hate someone that hurts you but then again you also learn something from it as well. Thanks for sharing keep up the good work.

Re: I Have You--- (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 06:08:36 AM AEST
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well written , strong...great poem

Re: I Have You--- (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 09:04:02 PM AEST
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i love the contradiction in this, becuase, honestly, life is a mess of contradictions. how someone can hurt you and save you at the same time is amazing and you depicted it so well in your poem. great job.

Re: I Have You--- (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 07:11:39 PM AEST
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this was amazing! very honest, and speaks strongly of anger.
"You were bitter sweet,
But so's the ending,"
^^that's my fave part!^^ =D )
i like this...it's just awesome...great write!
- Beth -

Re: I Have You--- (User Rating: 1 )
by whiteleo1984 on Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 09:19:36 AM AEST
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your not the only one, i've posted five poems in 2 days... o well, but your write was awesome, that you can still be angry yet be thankful for what this person/thing has done to you, very moving... keep up the good work

Re: I Have You--- (User Rating: 1 )
by wikedladi on Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 02:40:05 AM AEST
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i love it
i love it
i love it!
Great write!! i love the way its written, everything is stated so clearly! good job!

Re: I Have You--- (User Rating: 1 )
by lillyjane on Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 02:18:08 PM AEST
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I can relate to this brilliant poem as I have been in that position and still am in a way. xx

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