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Array ( [sid] => 116006 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Five Roses, Five Candles [time] => 2006-03-07 15:05:57 [hometext] => i ask of you comments so that i may rule the world!!..... or you could just tell me whatcha think, ya know? [bodytext] => flowers, they grow, wrapped around my finger
the happiness, it finally doth linger
a single white rose buds into five
five months gone by since you made me alive
blossoming roses feed off of our love
a blessing from God, sent from above
and, thanks to you, I can finally see
the person inside that's been hiding in me
we sit together, but a girl and a boy
light but five candles, fueled by our joy
they'll always burn on as we are together
five candles, five roses, the start of forever

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Five Roses, Five Candles

Contributed by blue_angel on Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 03:05:57 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

flowers, they grow, wrapped around my finger
the happiness, it finally doth linger
a single white rose buds into five
five months gone by since you made me alive
blossoming roses feed off of our love
a blessing from God, sent from above
and, thanks to you, I can finally see
the person inside that's been hiding in me
we sit together, but a girl and a boy
light but five candles, fueled by our joy
they'll always burn on as we are together
five candles, five roses, the start of forever

Copyright © blue_angel ... [ 2006-03-07 15:05:57]
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Re: Five Roses, Five Candles (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 03:51:37 PM AEST
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i like the words to this write it makes you think good write ty for posting it
r.m.wilder

Re: Five Roses, Five Candles (User Rating: 1 )
by spazz911 on Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 03:00:02 PM AEST
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awwww u n alex r amazing together, even if him n i dont always get along so well. im jealous of ur amazing poetic talent and wish i could write like you do..
u r my inspiration (for writing i mean)
awesome write
kc

Re: Five Roses, Five Candles (User Rating: 1 )
by snowflake on Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 05:51:14 PM AEST
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i'm just falling in love with your writing i just like your style my favorite lines:
blossoming roses feed off of our love
a blessing from God, sent from above

*~SnOwFlAkE~*

Re: Five Roses, Five Candles (User Rating: 1 )
by Abhisek on Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 09:47:00 AM AEST
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Thanks for this creation. You'r second best poet. You'r beautiful.

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