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[title] => Lost and Found - Track 1 - Second Chance
[time] => 2006-03-04 22:12:31
[hometext] => From a character created by The Ghost Moth and myself
[bodytext] => Slide battled demons
Most all of his days
But one night he met up
With a Reverend Coltraine
Who told him a story
And read from a book
And caused Slide to take
A long hardened look
At the life he had led
And the places he'd been
Regardless his past
Regardless his sins
The Preacherman said ...
Slide's soul was still his ~
( Mothy ... I hope I done him justice )
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Lost and Found - Track 1 - Second Chance
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Nazmythian
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Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 10:12:31 PM in AEST
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Slide battled demons
Most all of his days
But one night he met up
With a Reverend Coltraine
Who told him a story
And read from a book
And caused Slide to take
A long hardened look
At the life he had led
And the places he'd been
Regardless his past
Regardless his sins
The Preacherman said ...
Slide's soul was still his ~
( Mothy ... I hope I done him justice )
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Nazmythian
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2006-03-04 22:12:31]
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Re: Lost and Found - Track 1 - Second Chance
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by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 5th March 2006 @ 01:38:49 AM AEST
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Nazzy that is so awsome .
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Re: Lost and Found - Track 1 - Second Chance
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by NoSaint on
Sunday, 5th March 2006 @ 01:41:24 AM AEST
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Amazing
NS |
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Re: Lost and Found - Track 1 - Second Chance
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Sunday, 5th March 2006 @ 03:07:48 AM AEST
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Echoing the foregoing commenters. Truly awesome!
Blessings
Elizabeth Dandy |
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Re: Lost and Found - Track 1 - Second Chance
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Sunday, 5th March 2006 @ 03:07:51 AM AEST
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Echoing the foregoing commenters. Truly awesome!
Blessings
Elizabeth Dandy |
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Re: Lost and Found - Track 1 - Second Chance
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th March 2006 @ 11:29:30 PM AEST
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Outstanding, applaud, applaud, you have me hooked on your poetry.
hugs, raqueLeah |
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Re: Lost and Found - Track 1 - Second Chance
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by Willofree on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 05:30:15 PM AEST
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Naz,
I am left speechless.... really don't know what to say other then awesome piece and what talent! Words fall short......
You do yourself proud, my friend
Will/Terry |
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Re: Lost and Found - Track 1 - Second Chance
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 06:02:13 PM AEST
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"But when are they gonna learn, you can't rebuild
every bridge you burn?"
Wow. That is a commanding line. In fact this whole piece is quite
powerful. Scotty ... you've turned Slide's whisper in your ear, into
something grand. I know the rest is going to be just as impressive!
Wonderful work snazzy!
*hugs*
~Breezy |
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Re: Lost and Found - Track 1 - Second Chance
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 05:33:29 PM AEST
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Claps!!!!!!
Yeah!! well done! |
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Re: Lost and Found - Track 1 - Second Chance
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 02:25:42 PM AEST
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Ok, I am a very big fan of the poetry of Nazmythian. Then I discovered Slide, and became a fan of his as well. The two share the same body, but they write very different. Will they ever write together? I must know the answer to this complex question. Can two personalities come together in the name of art?
A great job as always Slide and thanks for sharing Naz!
- SCM |
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Re: Lost and Found - Track 1 - Second Chance
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 10:46:04 PM AEST
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Scott, I'm sure Mothy would love this, I'm sure he'd be proud. You've portrayed Slide very well. The character has such a personality, it's wonderful.
You are a very talented writer, my friend, a superb storyteller.
I love the repeated part of this.
Great write, my special friend.
*hugs tons*
Phil xxx |
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