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Looking to do nothing but pick a fight
Ugly creatures that are foul and stink
Wiping us out extinction is on the brink

No more elders to guide us through
Not much to protect us men folk are few
I feel compelled to protect my land
I know somehow I must make a stand

But these creatures are not alone in this act
Something or someone bigger is guiding that is a fact
For these monsters are not the smartest out there
To say they are stupid would be quite fair

I have to find the one who is in charge
And take them out no matter how large
It is up to me I have been told
It is my destiny that now unfolds

If I could I would definitely
Rip this page out of
The
Book
Of
Life [comments] => 8 [counter] => 246 [topic] => 31 [informant] => NoSaint [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => StoryPoetry )

The Book of Life Part II

Contributed by NoSaint on Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 07:13:11 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

They come in masses mainly at night
Looking to do nothing but pick a fight
Ugly creatures that are foul and stink
Wiping us out extinction is on the brink

No more elders to guide us through
Not much to protect us men folk are few
I feel compelled to protect my land
I know somehow I must make a stand

But these creatures are not alone in this act
Something or someone bigger is guiding that is a fact
For these monsters are not the smartest out there
To say they are stupid would be quite fair

I have to find the one who is in charge
And take them out no matter how large
It is up to me I have been told
It is my destiny that now unfolds

If I could I would definitely
Rip this page out of
The
Book
Of
Life

Copyright © NoSaint ... [ 2006-03-03 19:13:11]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Book of Life Part II (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 08:21:15 PM AEST
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Oh if we only could rip out the pages of life that are worrisome or dangerous. I see the path toward spiritual knowledge that you are traveling. I shall read as you continue on your path to enlightenment.

Rita

Re: The Book of Life Part II (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 09:17:38 PM AEST
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wow I love the flow of this and I agree on that last part.. it would be nice to rip out particular pages of our lives awesome job and thanks for sharing this piece with us

JENNI

Re: The Book of Life Part II (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Phantom on Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 10:51:10 PM AEST
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Well done my friend, I look forward to the other parts.

The Phantom

Re: The Book of Life Part II (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 11:59:15 PM AEST
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The creatures expect us to go in hiding.. guess what, we must stand up tall, with Him we are never defeated.

raqueLeah

Re: The Book of Life Part II (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 09:09:35 AM AEST
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Great poem Shari. Well composed....Mike

Re: The Book of Life Part II (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 09:42:52 AM AEST
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An amazing second act in this (I hope) ongoing saga. I enjoyed this tremendously. I love how you had the hero stand up, and actually belitte the enemy. Something that I think we all do when we are pushed into a corner. The way you ended this one was superb. I really did not think you would somewhat discard this act, abd yet in a way you did but didn't. Well done! I hope there are more.

BRAVO!

- SCM

Re: The Book of Life Part II (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Sunday, 5th March 2006 @ 01:54:24 AM AEST
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awsome awsome

Re: The Book of Life Part II (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Sunday, 5th March 2006 @ 03:15:27 AM AEST
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Oh so beautifully done. Some speak of "Enlightenment" Perhaps it consists in the acceptance with love of the present moment.

Blessings
Elizabeth

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