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Array ( [sid] => 115780 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => 20 Beautiful Acres Filled With Heavenly Trees [time] => 2006-03-03 18:30:07 [hometext] => This poem is about me and my boyfriend. I love him to death and we have promised each other forever but sometimes doubt floods my mind. This poem reflects the way i feel from time to time. Hope you like it. Please comment, i'd love to hear your opinion [bodytext] => It's like my heart is stretching,
Farther than it can bare.
Through the streets of Bakersfield
Right up through the polluted air

I long for you to be near
To cradle this fragile body of mine
I need you to look at me and say
Our love will not fade with the time

But even if i heard those words
Would i truly believe?
I can't stop thinking about the future
And what it holds for you and me

I sometimes dream we're married
Just like you said we'd be
On 20 beautiful acres
Filled with heavenly trees

Yet sometimes i tend to dream
You'll leave me here all alone
With no one to say "I love You"
And a heart made out of stone

I only wish i could believe
All the promises you make
But my mind is full of doubts
I guess i'll have to leave it to fate







[comments] => 1 [counter] => 196 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Ineedanap [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
20 Beautiful Acres Filled With Heavenly Trees

Contributed by Ineedanap on Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 06:30:07 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



It's like my heart is stretching,
Farther than it can bare.
Through the streets of Bakersfield
Right up through the polluted air

I long for you to be near
To cradle this fragile body of mine
I need you to look at me and say
Our love will not fade with the time

But even if i heard those words
Would i truly believe?
I can't stop thinking about the future
And what it holds for you and me

I sometimes dream we're married
Just like you said we'd be
On 20 beautiful acres
Filled with heavenly trees

Yet sometimes i tend to dream
You'll leave me here all alone
With no one to say "I love You"
And a heart made out of stone

I only wish i could believe
All the promises you make
But my mind is full of doubts
I guess i'll have to leave it to fate











Copyright © Ineedanap ... [ 2006-03-03 18:30:07]
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Re: 20 Beautiful Acres Filled With Heavenly Trees (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 10:17:05 PM AEST
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great job, wonderful poem, and i say don't be so paranoid, but nirvana speaks otherwise "just because you're paranoid dont mean they're not after you" =D

great write

~natalya




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