If the maiden day of spring
Could sing its tender song,
For you its symphony would bring
A masterpiece yearlong.
And if the setting sun mislaid
Its reason to return,
Your radiance would pervade
And the darkness you'd adorn.
Or if angels were to pray,
To you they would implore...
And inquire of your splendid way,
Then..they'd learn to soar!
For you my world revolves my sweet
And just your thought makes me complete

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So Divine - A Sonnet Contributed by wizard on Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 11:11:34 AM in AEST Topic: LovePoetry If the maiden day of spring Could sing its tender song, For you its symphony would bring A masterpiece yearlong. And if the setting sun mislaid Its reason to return, Your radiance would pervade And the darkness you'd adorn. Or if angels were to pray, To you they would implore... And inquire of your splendid way, Then..they'd learn to soar! For you my world revolves my sweet And just your thought makes me complete Copyright © wizard ... [ 2006-03-01 11:11:34] (Date/Time posted on site) Advertisments: Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem

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Re: So Divine - A Sonnet (User Rating: 1 ) by Vampirequeen on Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 11:54:45 AM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) awww what a beautiful and romantic write. great job :)

Re: So Divine - A Sonnet (User Rating: 1 ) by slogan on Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 12:04:39 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) I really like this one...jh

Re: So Divine - A Sonnet (User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 01:12:47 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) *huge sighs* oh my, dear Paul! What an absolute BEAUTY! A magnificent piece of tender loveliness! Wonderfully laid down and oh god, so bloody emotive! With each line it just gets softer and more brilliant. Incredibly "heart-hugging". I love this altogether. A singularly sweet piece of poetic perfection. Those last two lines . . . good lord, how positively moving and inspiring. Almost like a whispered sigh. Gosh, I can't say enough how this one touched me. The composition itself is outstanding, but the word choices are so ... uhm ... divine. lol Yeah . . . perfectly titled! Très belle !! ~Breezy

Re: So Divine - A Sonnet (User Rating: 1 ) by twick on Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 01:13:22 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) I think sonnets are harder to write because of their structure. You did a great job.

Re: So Divine - A Sonnet (User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 02:20:09 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) words danced with a soft flow of romance, nicely done. Michelle

Re: So Divine - A Sonnet (User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 02:52:55 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) Well done, Paul...Such a beautiful poem... Hats off to you!! Jenni

Re: So Divine - A Sonnet (User Rating: 1 ) by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 05:48:21 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) ~*Paul*~ Roxie sums it all up. A divine sonnet penned to perfection. An outstanding sonnet written by a very gifted and talented poet. Well done ~*Paul*~ *warm hugs* ~sue~

Re: So Divine - A Sonnet (User Rating: 1 ) by brew on Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 10:21:57 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) A frewell, yet NOT forever in the bleekness of the heart. Just beautiful.........Romantic, and so sleek. They will find their way back. Loved the free flow of all the words. Brew~

Re: So Divine - A Sonnet (User Rating: 1 ) by Man_On_High on Monday, 6th March 2006 @ 01:15:58 AM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) Beautiful work bro- ...written with such tender discipline.. well placed italics as well..great emphasis "If the maiden day of spring Could sing its tender song For you its symphony would bring A masterpiece yearlong" amazing.. B

Re: So Divine - A Sonnet (User Rating: 1 ) by Archie on Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 03:43:51 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) Your poem is very encouraging: It has depth, emotion and a resonating tone that keeps the reader enthralled til the end. Nice write.

Re: So Divine - A Sonnet (User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 08:14:46 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) a most beautiful lyric poem, your sonnet.. a most wonderful meditating voice you gave to this write.. RL

Re: So Divine - A Sonnet (User Rating: 1 ) by Lucid_Tides on Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 03:37:25 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) This is a great read. The mental thoughts that are projected are easily understood. Great for romance. Awesome.

Re: So Divine - A Sonnet (User Rating: 1 ) by hauntedscorp on Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 10:37:37 AM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) How very sigh-inducing Paul!!! What a splendid piece; it really makes the reader smile while reading this. It flows along great as well. Very well done; I enjoyed this. Scorp.