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Array ( [sid] => 114798 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lady In The Moon [time] => 2006-02-14 10:53:12 [hometext] => Written on a recent trip to Miami...Gazing upon the midnight sky, one thing on my mind - You. [bodytext] =>
The Miami moon repels its clouds
To make way for your beauty to shine.
So many miles between us, though we can both see the moon
In it, I see you. These many miles can’t keep us apart.

I see your eyes shine in the moonlit sky
I feel your touch through a gentle breeze
Your smile comes to me in a nocturnal rainbow
Your whispering voice tells me that you're by my side.

If you see the distant star twinkle...know that it’s my heart,
Skipping a beat the way it does each time I think of you.
If only you could come to me and share the view
You'd see how my night revolves around you.

You...my lady in the moon [comments] => 8 [counter] => 398 [topic] => 2 [informant] => wizard [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Lady In The Moon

Contributed by wizard on Tuesday, 14th February 2006 @ 10:53:12 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

The Miami moon repels its clouds
To make way for your beauty to shine.
So many miles between us, though we can both see the moon
In it, I see you. These many miles can’t keep us apart.

I see your eyes shine in the moonlit sky
I feel your touch through a gentle breeze
Your smile comes to me in a nocturnal rainbow
Your whispering voice tells me that you're by my side.

If you see the distant star twinkle...know that it’s my heart,
Skipping a beat the way it does each time I think of you.
If only you could come to me and share the view
You'd see how my night revolves around you.

You...my lady in the moon

Copyright Â© wizard ... [ 2006-02-14 10:53:12]
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Re: Lady In The Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 14th February 2006 @ 12:36:35 PM AEST
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the title attracted me to this write. Im so very pleased that I read this. Vivid display of loving and nature your style and words blended to make this a poetic picture. Something about the moon isnt there?

Michelle

Re: Lady In The Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 14th February 2006 @ 06:45:37 PM AEST
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An absolutely breathtaking write. I'm sure the view is spectacular.

Sweet, touching and completely beautiful. I simply love your
use of imagery and the clever way you elucidate your thoughts.
So stunning, in fact, that the actual moon pales in comparison.

I, of course, adore this.

~Breezy

Re: Lady In The Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Tuesday, 14th February 2006 @ 10:19:31 PM AEST
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Paul,
A beautifully written piece of poetry that captivates the reader from start to finish.
I really like ur style of writing, the imagery u cast and the natural flow of ur work.
A beautifully penned poem well worth the read.
*warm hugs*
~sue~

Re: Lady In The Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Friday, 17th February 2006 @ 12:02:04 AM AEST
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Great write bro-

analogies...one hundred dollars..
metaphors...five hundred dollars..
imagery...one thousand dollars..

PEOPLE INVOLVED - PRICELESS..

Billy
(what the hell)

Re: Lady In The Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 10:36:56 AM AEST
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what a beautiful write so romantic .
you did very wellin this write.

hugs

Re: Lady In The Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 03:48:48 PM AEST
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This is a great write. It reminds me of a song I heard in a 1950's play.

"If you try
you'll find me
where the sky
meets the sea
here am I
your special island
come to me
come to me
Bali Hai
Bali Hai
Bali Hai"

Re: Lady In The Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 15th June 2006 @ 02:29:34 AM AEST
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Beautiful tittle and lovely work. as always a
most true to form peice of artful effort.

Ben

Re: Lady In The Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by Keilantra on Saturday, 8th July 2006 @ 10:18:22 AM AEST
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"Your smile comes to me in a nocturnal rainbow"

Wow. Thats nice. Really nice.

xXx

~kei

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