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and it touches your hair with soft playful caress,
this all common thing seems then a view wrought for me,
and gives happy strong feelings that life can’t suppress.

As when we walk along the path being alone,
the sun shines on your face and gives me a near sight
of your radiant glow that reveals smooth skin tone,
and with loving look I ken that you are all right.

There’s a beam in your eye put there by God’s good grace,
an intelligent brain with a humorous mind,
all ensconced, kept behind a well sculptured young face,
your pure soul with poor mine doth eternally bind.

Hair of brownish blond color and eyes that have shine,
now always live with me and do know, love, you’re mine.

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Gentle Breeze

Contributed by ramfire on Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 02:21:10 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

When the breeze is as gentle as I now do see,
and it touches your hair with soft playful caress,
this all common thing seems then a view wrought for me,
and gives happy strong feelings that life can’t suppress.

As when we walk along the path being alone,
the sun shines on your face and gives me a near sight
of your radiant glow that reveals smooth skin tone,
and with loving look I ken that you are all right.

There’s a beam in your eye put there by God’s good grace,
an intelligent brain with a humorous mind,
all ensconced, kept behind a well sculptured young face,
your pure soul with poor mine doth eternally bind.

Hair of brownish blond color and eyes that have shine,
now always live with me and do know, love, you’re mine.

Copyright Â© ramfire ... [ 2006-02-09 14:21:10]
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Re: Gentle Breeze (User Rating: 1 )
by themonk on Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 03:08:24 PM AEST
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inticning and veyr romantic, how many girsl did u pick up wiht this poem? lol jk well doe my frind, greta style with nice uniquness.

Re: Gentle Breeze (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 04:23:51 PM AEST
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beautifully written

NS

Re: Gentle Breeze (User Rating: 1 )
by justinjohnoliver on Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 05:51:18 PM AEST
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I really like it! You have a really good use of your vocabulary. I love how you mentioned God's good grace. Keep up the great work, and if you don't mind please read and comment on my poem The Ocean's Fury. Thank You.

Re: Gentle Breeze (User Rating: 1 )
by lovespoetic0518 on Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 11:22:24 AM AEST
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You write beautifully about this "girl". It's like a little story of your love within this poem. Great piece. Kimberly

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