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Lament a tear for every piercing
Fade this skin of agony
That I may be set free

Living proof that I bleed for you
You wanted it now here’s the truth
Cry alone now die alone
See me there, an unwilling demise from you

Laying here, augmented tribulation
These holes of life, that now drain me dry
Life held now on thin metal
Fade away, that I may be set free

In and out of this darkened chateau
I chose to walk this path alone
To find the way of higher sovereignty
To relieve the burden on the spread skin

Let death now caress my soul
Bringing it to the paramount blessing
Entrance my illusions, and finally set me free
Let me roam, in faded anguish
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Deaths Promise

Contributed by Kayden on Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 04:12:39 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Come quick now you have to see this
Lament a tear for every piercing
Fade this skin of agony
That I may be set free

Living proof that I bleed for you
You wanted it now here’s the truth
Cry alone now die alone
See me there, an unwilling demise from you

Laying here, augmented tribulation
These holes of life, that now drain me dry
Life held now on thin metal
Fade away, that I may be set free

In and out of this darkened chateau
I chose to walk this path alone
To find the way of higher sovereignty
To relieve the burden on the spread skin

Let death now caress my soul
Bringing it to the paramount blessing
Entrance my illusions, and finally set me free
Let me roam, in faded anguish

Copyright Â© Kayden ... [ 2006-02-08 16:12:39]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Deaths Promise (User Rating: 1 )
by gah_veh on Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 05:44:31 PM AEST
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great poem very descriptive in a way great thinking out side the box, loved the wording

Re: Deaths Promise (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 05:45:56 PM AEST
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A real thought provoking write you have here. The ryhme and flow sensational. A great and very well penned piece of poetry. Captivates the reader from beginning to end. Well done.
*warm hugs*
~sue~

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