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Array ( [sid] => 114374 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Be Free [time] => 2006-02-06 17:17:19 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I wish there was no you,
I wish there was no me,
And I know for sure that there is no happy ending.
I want you to be happy…
I want you to be free.
Free from me,
And from the hassle...
Of trying to love,
And hold on to something,
That was clearly never
Meant to be.

I want you to be happy.
So leave if you must,
I do understand.
Because if I were in your shoes,
I would want someone to untie the strings.
And let me run barefoot,
Even thought it's not spring.

Find someone you deserve,
Someone who isn't afraid to hold your hand.
That person who is the proudest,
When she gets to say that you are her man.

Get that girl,
That one who who loves you.
Because you deserve to be free,
Free from me,
And the reasons why I could never
Truly love thee. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 271 [topic] => 22 [informant] => MuCho_AmOr [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Be Free

Contributed by MuCho_AmOr on Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 05:17:19 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I wish there was no you,
I wish there was no me,
And I know for sure that there is no happy ending.
I want you to be happy…
I want you to be free.
Free from me,
And from the hassle...
Of trying to love,
And hold on to something,
That was clearly never
Meant to be.

I want you to be happy.
So leave if you must,
I do understand.
Because if I were in your shoes,
I would want someone to untie the strings.
And let me run barefoot,
Even thought it's not spring.

Find someone you deserve,
Someone who isn't afraid to hold your hand.
That person who is the proudest,
When she gets to say that you are her man.

Get that girl,
That one who who loves you.
Because you deserve to be free,
Free from me,
And the reasons why I could never
Truly love thee.

Copyright Â© MuCho_AmOr ... [ 2006-02-06 17:17:19]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Be Free (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 05:35:40 PM AEST
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Truly hard to let go but you said it very well

NS

Re: Be Free (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 06:26:36 PM AEST
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Sad but well written.
huggs,
emy

Re: Be Free (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 07:14:59 PM AEST
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quite a sad poem, you really put emphasis on the loss and you wrote it well !

Because if I were in your shoes,
I would want someone to untie the strings.
And let me run barefoot,
Even thought it's not spring.!

My favourite part
well done

Re: Be Free (User Rating: 1 )
by shortcut on Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 08:11:06 PM AEST
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I love the flow of this poem, very smooth, and easy to understand as well. Also deeply touching. You write beautifully, keep it up! :)Rose.

Re: Be Free (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 08:27:49 PM AEST
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Deeply touching....
Jenni

Re: Be Free (User Rating: 1 )
by themonk on Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 08:45:55 PM AEST
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very well written, ur symbolism shines clear, kudos to ya.

Re: Be Free (User Rating: 1 )
by mrpeanut64 on Tuesday, 7th February 2006 @ 02:42:51 AM AEST
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"Get that girl,
That one who loves you.
Because you deserve to be free,
Free from me,
And the reasons why I could never
Truly love thee."

Love is a funny thing and the fact you let him go shows maybe you truly did love him, just not in a way you could understand.

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