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Array ( [sid] => 114206 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => the day my slutty wife cheated [time] => 2006-02-03 18:32:10 [hometext] => comments welcome [bodytext] => i came home early one night
to find two young lovers
a man with my wife underneath
my very own covers

she started to scream and
started to cry
and as i pulled out my gun
i knew someone had to die

one of us will soon be ridding
in a black herse
and deep inside i knew it would be
my life or hers

too late to hide and too
late to run
the bullet already exited the
barrel of my gun

i realy hate to say it but im glad
she was the one who died
cause they say youll never get to
heavon if you commit suicide

now im out here on the run but far
from defeated
and ill never forget the day my slutty
wife cheated

my good friend if you get off of work early
tonight stop at the store
or you migh come home too early to find
out that your wifes a cheating whore



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the day my slutty wife cheated

Contributed by jessejames on Friday, 3rd February 2006 @ 06:32:10 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



i came home early one night
to find two young lovers
a man with my wife underneath
my very own covers

she started to scream and
started to cry
and as i pulled out my gun
i knew someone had to die

one of us will soon be ridding
in a black herse
and deep inside i knew it would be
my life or hers

too late to hide and too
late to run
the bullet already exited the
barrel of my gun

i realy hate to say it but im glad
she was the one who died
cause they say youll never get to
heavon if you commit suicide

now im out here on the run but far
from defeated
and ill never forget the day my slutty
wife cheated

my good friend if you get off of work early
tonight stop at the store
or you migh come home too early to find
out that your wifes a cheating whore







Copyright © jessejames ... [ 2006-02-03 18:32:10]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: the day my slutty wife cheated (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 3rd February 2006 @ 07:05:55 PM AEST
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You know, the first part of the poem was well written, but I think you went too far with the last stanza. Don't you think that there're enough problems without accusations?


Re: the day my slutty wife cheated (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 3rd February 2006 @ 07:20:30 PM AEST
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woawww very real write.
Michelle


Re: the day my slutty wife cheated (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Friday, 3rd February 2006 @ 07:26:12 PM AEST
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lol what a write ty for posting


Re: the day my slutty wife cheated (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 4th February 2006 @ 12:20:32 AM AEST
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hmmmmm Hope to see something better from you in the future. Not the worst, not the best. I think you can do much better.


- SCM


Re: the day my slutty wife cheated (User Rating: 1 )
by all_that_i_can_be on Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 06:14:21 PM AEST
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loved it.




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