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Array ( [sid] => 114067 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Smiles and Razors Can Only Go So Deep... [time] => 2006-01-31 22:11:04 [hometext] => this is all a lie...only praying for someone to save me... [bodytext] => Laughing on the outside
Yet, dieing within
Crying on the inside
Just beneath my skin
Where the razor
Used to tear,
Through my veins
Expessing despair

One too deep...
My mistake
Promisses I said to keep
The pain to sedate
Only wished to be left;
Only hoped to be solved,
If I hadn't wept
You wouldn't be involved

I would've died in silence,
All alone
If the moon wan't so luminous:
The blood and tears wouldn't show
You should have walked on,
Pain no heed
Like everyone else,
Just left me to bleed

Shouldn't have made me
Tell you
I shouldn't have
Let you through
All those things wouldn't happen
If it weren't for you...

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 265 [topic] => 14 [informant] => SmileSkinDeep [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

Smiles and Razors Can Only Go So Deep...

Contributed by SmileSkinDeep on Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 10:11:04 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

Laughing on the outside
Yet, dieing within
Crying on the inside
Just beneath my skin
Where the razor
Used to tear,
Through my veins
Expessing despair

One too deep...
My mistake
Promisses I said to keep
The pain to sedate
Only wished to be left;
Only hoped to be solved,
If I hadn't wept
You wouldn't be involved

I would've died in silence,
All alone
If the moon wan't so luminous:
The blood and tears wouldn't show
You should have walked on,
Pain no heed
Like everyone else,
Just left me to bleed

Shouldn't have made me
Tell you
I shouldn't have
Let you through
All those things wouldn't happen
If it weren't for you...

Copyright © SmileSkinDeep ... [ 2006-01-31 22:11:04]
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Re: Smiles and Razors Can Only Go So Deep... (User Rating: 1 )
by temper on Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 01:23:52 PM AEST
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nice poem i fell like that some times

Re: Smiles and Razors Can Only Go So Deep... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 03:55:05 PM AEST
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Good stuff! I loved the title!

Re: Smiles and Razors Can Only Go So Deep... (User Rating: 1 )
by Faust on Monday, 13th February 2006 @ 08:38:20 PM AEST
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This really is a great poem you should be proud of it.

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