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[title] => Sick dreams
[time] => 2006-01-31 20:51:07
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[bodytext] => Sick dreams and wickid schemes running thru my mind while deep in a trance with a hazey glaze in my eyes. I'm lost in the world without a care of being without somewhere to go, without someone to be with, without fear of death. If i slipped with this knife, would it hurt if i slit my wrists and bled to death? Who would miss me if i left thie horrible place? I feel my parents dying inside of hatred, hatred of themselves for not listening to me. I feel friends crying for not being there for me when i needed them. I see people i didnt know well or for very long crying looking down apon my grave. I watch down upon everyone close to me, wishing i hadnt left this place after i see how it affected everyone.
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Sick dreams
Contributed by
trev_clev
on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 08:51:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Sick dreams and wickid schemes running thru my mind while deep in a trance with a hazey glaze in my eyes. I'm lost in the world without a care of being without somewhere to go, without someone to be with, without fear of death. If i slipped with this knife, would it hurt if i slit my wrists and bled to death? Who would miss me if i left thie horrible place? I feel my parents dying inside of hatred, hatred of themselves for not listening to me. I feel friends crying for not being there for me when i needed them. I see people i didnt know well or for very long crying looking down apon my grave. I watch down upon everyone close to me, wishing i hadnt left this place after i see how it affected everyone.
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Re: Sick dreams
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by Jrtoews on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 09:29:08 PM AEST
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| good poem completly understand what you meant i have felt exactly that way |
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Re: Sick dreams
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 03:03:17 AM AEST
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| Wonderful write. So full of emotion. Great work! Keep writing! |
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Re: Sick dreams
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 02:47:45 AM AEST
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| hmmm very interesting write. |
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Re: Sick dreams
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by from_first_to_last on
Friday, 3rd February 2006 @ 05:48:34 PM AEST
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yep yep thats so true.but the part of suicide i hate the most is that when you die is when you find out how many people care about you.great write
luv skittles |
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Re: Sick dreams
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by redtears on
Saturday, 22nd April 2006 @ 09:21:38 PM AEST
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| it actually made me tear up! please keep posting! |
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