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[sid] => 113782
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[aid] => mick
[title] => Looking
[time] => 2006-01-26 06:34:24
[hometext] => it is instilled that we seek
[bodytext] => Some do not see
Humanity suffers
Yet some are free
What may we offer ?
Others die
Others flee
Why ?
Blessed are the poor
Wealthy feast
Blessed what for ?
Wealthy eat
Party often and galor
Many hunger many weak
Suffer some all sort of horror
What should mankind seek ?
A garabage dump children explore
Muddy water many drink
You will always have the poor
Glasses toast clink clink clink
All is well
All is fine
Poverty a living hell
Another glass of finest wine
Blessed are the meek
These things will always be
It is instilled a greater to seek
I have not come to bring peace
Satan has entered our world
Woman in labor will often screech
Evil is always around
To gain the world is but a loss
Till the trumpet makes its sound
Seek Me and carry your cross
Truth is what I bring
The Father Spirit and I are One
With Abraham many will sing
Although he has been defeated
Satan doesn't yet know
My world will be perfected
His power of death the last to go
Seek and you shall find
Knock and it will be open
The Father is just and kind
Many await your entrance to heaven
I Am the God of the living
Not the dead
Love and be forgiving
Fear not and do not dread
Sinned
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Looking
Contributed by
Sinned
on
Thursday, 26th January 2006 @ 06:34:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Some do not see
Humanity suffers
Yet some are free
What may we offer ?
Others die
Others flee
Why ?
Blessed are the poor
Wealthy feast
Blessed what for ?
Wealthy eat
Party often and galor
Many hunger many weak
Suffer some all sort of horror
What should mankind seek ?
A garabage dump children explore
Muddy water many drink
You will always have the poor
Glasses toast clink clink clink
All is well
All is fine
Poverty a living hell
Another glass of finest wine
Blessed are the meek
These things will always be
It is instilled a greater to seek
I have not come to bring peace
Satan has entered our world
Woman in labor will often screech
Evil is always around
To gain the world is but a loss
Till the trumpet makes its sound
Seek Me and carry your cross
Truth is what I bring
The Father Spirit and I are One
With Abraham many will sing
Although he has been defeated
Satan doesn't yet know
My world will be perfected
His power of death the last to go
Seek and you shall find
Knock and it will be open
The Father is just and kind
Many await your entrance to heaven
I Am the God of the living
Not the dead
Love and be forgiving
Fear not and do not dread
Sinned
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Re: Looking
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Thursday, 26th January 2006 @ 09:21:25 AM AEST
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Thyis is just the poem I needed.
A reminder how many are suffering and exposed to pain beyond description.
Rare are those that emphasize, think about it, and recommend them prayerfully to God.
You have a keen eye for human suffering Dennis and that is a great gift and blessing.
Thank you for sharing this so very beautifully reminder in due time.
Abundant blessings to you
Elizabeth |
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Re: Looking
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 26th January 2006 @ 11:05:23 AM AEST
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This is a really great poem. I liked alot. It flowed really well and it was great to read. Thank you for the comment on Valentin. I appreciate it alot.
christina |
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Re: Looking
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by boobiepeach on
Thursday, 26th January 2006 @ 11:15:06 AM AEST
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it is a brave man that can have sympothy for others in need. wonderful write well done
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Re: Looking
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by Sinned on
Friday, 27th January 2006 @ 04:24:05 AM AEST
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Hi Elizabeth
Thank you so much on the generous comment on my poem Looking. Insite ? I wish I had more. Questions are many and faith is weak. Oh ! The faith of a mustard seed. Always prayer is what I need.
May you find blessings in every sunray.
To carry you over in times of grey.
Your friend
Dennis |
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Re: Looking
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 03:02:55 AM AEST
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| WOW...that's all I can say..... |
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Re: Looking
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 03:55:39 PM AEST
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We believers can be a positive force in our communities where we live and where we work, and with the world. Our love demonstrates by giving all that we have, adorning others with our Love from Him. Our prayers are His song to assist others, all, not just believers, but all as we all strive together to strengthen the world. The majority of people who build strong relationships within communities and the world will lead us to a most stronger and more strategic partnership in the world when we can share our strengths to ceate the positiveness of those who are struggling across and around the world. Even if it be a small number of those that care and show love and respect to their neighbors, it is in this supportive cause that is most important in order to develop a strong relationship with God and others. Your poem expresses the needs and concerns for our world. I deeply thank you for writing this poem, putting the focus out there, so we can all meet these challenges together. We seek in our kindness, our mission is to love and respect all consistent with visions and values. We all have a responsiblity to share our love and keep the people and our environment in proper order. It is a great and loving message to share to keep us all going on with the living God, His love that is the greatest cure. We can all learn to share our strengths of His love to create a positive change in the lives of hundreds of thousands of children and families around the world. Thank you for this wonderful message in your poem. Raquel Leah
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