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Finally Real Love
Contributed by
temper
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Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 02:54:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Finally Real Love
Its about time for this
all dis puppy love really got me *****
finally i found you
finally someone so real and true
finally i got real love
finally i got you
boi u make me wana move
and b closer to you
boi u know u my boo
i feel yo pain from miles away
and wit my love i will pay
and price dat comes my way
i juss can't stop writein
for our love i'm fightin
should i give up my life here
juss pack up and move there
Truth Be Told I'd Do It In A Minute
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temper
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2006-01-25 14:54:16]
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Re: Finally Real Love
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 03:14:46 PM AEST
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very honest lovely write.
the word dat though really takes away
from the flow and scheme of things.
Its your art so go with it the way you choose
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