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Sparkling man that floats through, up high

Faultless in nature and taintless to thine
Move up in winter and stand oh so shy

Tidy is mind that has not a scale
A graceful thought that has much to hale

Roll out a carpet that I deserve none
Innocent woman in blood holding gun

Fresh in the mind and so spick and span
Blank canvas is waiting, hold out your hand

Elegant but simple in moving too quick
Neat and orderly in which makes one sick

Jump to the past and rewind the to come
Pure intentioned rise of stainless thumb

Delicate hand tainted by one
Unpolluted sky cloudy, now done

A well-kept view that has seen no birds eye
My words and ganders simple, keep your apple pie
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Birds Eye View

Contributed by boobiepeach on Tuesday, 24th January 2006 @ 07:02:49 PM in AEST
Topic: secrets

Mount and demolish your apple pie
Sparkling man that floats through, up high

Faultless in nature and taintless to thine
Move up in winter and stand oh so shy

Tidy is mind that has not a scale
A graceful thought that has much to hale

Roll out a carpet that I deserve none
Innocent woman in blood holding gun

Fresh in the mind and so spick and span
Blank canvas is waiting, hold out your hand

Elegant but simple in moving too quick
Neat and orderly in which makes one sick

Jump to the past and rewind the to come
Pure intentioned rise of stainless thumb

Delicate hand tainted by one
Unpolluted sky cloudy, now done

A well-kept view that has seen no birds eye
My words and ganders simple, keep your apple pie

Copyright © boobiepeach ... [ 2006-01-24 19:02:49]
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Re: Birds Eye View (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 02:29:37 AM AEST
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Very creative writing.
huggs,
emy

Re: Birds Eye View (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 12:26:43 PM AEST
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Nicely penned, good chosen words.

Re: Birds Eye View (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Thursday, 26th January 2006 @ 10:06:37 AM AEST
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Unicque

Sinned

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