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im giving up
sleeps not coming
the sandman
has skipped my house
i watch as the seconds
turn to minutes
which drag into hours
ill give up now
whats another night
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i give up

Contributed by vampyrekiss on Friday, 13th January 2006 @ 07:29:11 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

i quit
im giving up
sleeps not coming
the sandman
has skipped my house
i watch as the seconds
turn to minutes
which drag into hours
ill give up now
whats another night
with out sleep

Copyright © vampyrekiss ... [ 2006-01-13 19:29:11]
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Re: i give up (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 13th January 2006 @ 07:55:08 PM AEST
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it must be in the air we can start the walking zombie club eh?

I liked how this fit perfectly with that feeling
opf tossing and turning and getting no sleep I know this well

Michelle

Re: i give up (User Rating: 1 )
by Drapes on Friday, 13th January 2006 @ 09:39:58 PM AEST
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Interesting...I like it though. And I know what you mean!!
-Drapes-

Re: i give up (User Rating: 1 )
by TheGrimReapersHourglass on Thursday, 15th November 2007 @ 07:12:43 AM AEST
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Inter Night Inter Light Off To Never Never Land. Sleep is Hell as if I was with a man at all times I cannot Rest. Very Nice Poetry piece caught my attention. Waking up from concrete alone with mostly the Police no femal love or heart Have Mersey On Me. There Is nothing more than a femal heart. No drug can sooth me as a femal heart lover and wars. Acusations of drugs They do not understand as well as sleep,hunger,and head oil fun between man and woman. There is no alcohol powerfull enough to sooth than a femal heart lover and wars. I am a caucasion male older with many past acusations and desire caucasion femals with all respects in personal as well as sleep,hunger,lovers. Try reading The Grim Reapers(Reepers)Hourglass Rock And Roll Past To Future on TheGrimReapersHourglass.Thank You from The Grim Reaper,DevilsPriest KnownAs Lord-find on www.ozzy.com-:Denver L. Please Message Me I been a loaner most my life pass words to caucasion femals More Human Than Human mabey new to what you would with vines new no Fred Flinstone Mobile.

Re: i give up (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 5th December 2008 @ 04:39:52 PM AEST
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interesting poem.

-phil

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