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Array ( [sid] => 112970 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Thoughts [time] => 2006-01-11 09:26:31 [hometext] => ...a person with Attention Deficit Disorder (ADD) has a constant barrage of uncontrolled thoughts bombarding them every moment of the day... [bodytext] => Thoughts

...nebulous thoughts,
they ebb,
they flow,
meander about,
a silent shadow;
...they whimsically wander,
over here,
over there,
snuggle into corners,
an overstuffed chair;
...they slither into crevices,
into bottomless pits,
they scream through the heavens,
a mind-boggling blitz;
...they never cease,
they never rest,
they shuffle about,
never certain how best
to phrase a concept,
express an ideal,
contain within words
everything that you feel;
...they can be tyrants,
refusing to bend,
or the gentle caress
of a caring friend;
...they are often times witless,
embarrassingly dull,
actually quite stupid,
or surprisingly full
to the brim,
overflowing,
with wisdom and truth,
sometimes more trouble
...than an abscessed tooth;
raucous and rowdy
when one needs to sleep,
when desperately needed,
they won't make a peep;
...they laugh at me,
tease me,
cuss me out good,
flatter,
cajole,
or, say that I should
do this,
or maybe,
quite possibly that,
a minute or so
after the fact...

My thoughts are my children,
too,
mischievous and playful,
don't know what I'd do
without them.

rko
January 11, 2006
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 455 [topic] => 21 [informant] => enigma [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 16 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Thoughts

Contributed by enigma on Wednesday, 11th January 2006 @ 09:26:31 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Thoughts

...nebulous thoughts,
they ebb,
they flow,
meander about,
a silent shadow;
...they whimsically wander,
over here,
over there,
snuggle into corners,
an overstuffed chair;
...they slither into crevices,
into bottomless pits,
they scream through the heavens,
a mind-boggling blitz;
...they never cease,
they never rest,
they shuffle about,
never certain how best
to phrase a concept,
express an ideal,
contain within words
everything that you feel;
...they can be tyrants,
refusing to bend,
or the gentle caress
of a caring friend;
...they are often times witless,
embarrassingly dull,
actually quite stupid,
or surprisingly full
to the brim,
overflowing,
with wisdom and truth,
sometimes more trouble
...than an abscessed tooth;
raucous and rowdy
when one needs to sleep,
when desperately needed,
they won't make a peep;
...they laugh at me,
tease me,
cuss me out good,
flatter,
cajole,
or, say that I should
do this,
or maybe,
quite possibly that,
a minute or so
after the fact...

My thoughts are my children,
too,
mischievous and playful,
don't know what I'd do
without them.

rko
January 11, 2006

Copyright © enigma ... [ 2006-01-11 09:26:31]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by Fernanda_F_Rocha on Wednesday, 11th January 2006 @ 10:35:39 AM AEST
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A beautiful description of an unconditional love.

F. Rocha

Re: Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 11th January 2006 @ 01:31:35 PM AEST
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Well written work is ADD a real illness or is it just a label we use when a child wants attention? or am I just being weird again!

J

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